Her Guardian

I just finished reading and I have to say this was an a amazing story. I loved it through everything that went down even when sometimes I didnt agree because that only made the story better when everything ended right in its place. I loved that it was a happily ever after ending. would you want to do like a bonus chapter like 5 or 10 years later? I want to see what happens. idk just putting it out there. also do you have anymore stories bc I love your writing.

him about her parents. See niko is always into some shit because personally I just don't see why he don't get out of the game because it isn't like he need the money are anything but yet at the same time you can tell that he doesn't like doing what he does but he just like the money I just wish he didn't have to be so caught up in the situation. Damn what is the worst way for niko to be put in jail and on top of that he have to call august to let him know where is at

Chapter 11: I have to agree with shawn because honestly I think that it is time for them to tell niko that they are dating each other because they already know that if he hear it from somebody else he is going to be pissed about and as for maya & niko parents you can tell that they had hurt them because they don't even want to talk about them at all but as of right now I just think that august should give her time so that she can fully open up to him so she can be comfortable so she can tell him

but I am glad that august is happy that he found somebody because I think that most of all he is happy that he have somebody that cares about him

Chapter 10: Damn I wouldn't think that maya would act so nerves around august at this time but than again I can see why but like she said they done cross so many lines it seems like that maya is getting more bolder by the minute I sure didn't think that she would be the one to make the first move like she did. But damn august is about to make maya into a freak but finally that they had made it official but I think that august was serious when he said he didn't want to see her with no other nigga

One thing that I like about august is that he is always trying to get maya to do something new and I thought that it was cute that they both left there date but honesty they wasn't enjoying them self any way but I like the fact that august was willing to be with maya despite what niko have to say about there relationship. But you no what this right where is Niko fault on why maya is so shelter because she didn't even get the joke on what he meant about big feet lol august have a lot of work

you know what Donovan really have no life because to me if he did I don't think that he would be so involved around august and maya because to me if maya told him a million times that she don't want nothing to do with him than why in the hell would he get him self into so more shit see it is shit like this is why I don't like Donovan at all. And as for pam she already got something out of the situation she got a piece of august and if she would of got paid it really would be worth her while

for ever while he do him. But august he is so jealous because at the moment he cant even enjoy himself because he is so busy watching maya and seeing what she was doing and at this moment you can tell that he really don't want to be there with pam and she is not the female that he wants to be under right about now. But most of all I thought that it was cute on how august had confessed what was going on to maya because it is obvious that them two belong with each other

Chapter 9 part 2: It seems like that august was getting a little jealous once he had saw her out with derrick and I think that maya was surprised to see august with another girl because to me I don't think that she was ready for that. But to me I think that august done moved down her aisle just to be petty and try to keep a eye on her because to me he could of sit else where and as for august been mad I don't see why he is upset about maya been on a date was she just supposed to stay at home for

he should know that if maya had agreed to go out with him than his changes there is not going to happened at all. Damn it that was the case maya might as well went out with Donovan because it seems like derrick is into his self to but damn august & maya would both would run into each other while they are at the movies on a date

think that niko hold so much loyalty to him. But damn Pamela was bold was hell just because that august gave her the dick like how the hell you go try and plan somebody else night like seriously she was bold as hell for that one. See august done gave her the dick and now Pamela just lost her mind because I think she through august for a loop. But most of all I am surprised that maya had agreed to go to the movies with derrick I am guessing that she really needed to move on and as for Donovan

Chapter 9: I know that maya worries about her brother a lot but to me if niko is fine with doing the kind of job she shouldn't worry that much because niko decided to put his own self into the situation but considering that it is her brother at the same time I can see why she worried because to me I she just dont wants anything to happened with to him but I think that the reason why niko had given up is because he feels like nobody haven't gave him a chance but his boss and to me that is why i

fast. but one minute august gets on my nerves but than it is times like this is where they are just so cute but I like the fact that august is worried about if maya is moving out just because of him I loved that he always questions her feelings and her decision that she makes in life.

they don't want to be friends they want to be more than friends. To me august doesn't seems like the kind of guy that would just want to be friends because to me it is clearly that he wants to be in a relationship with maya but do to his friendship with niko that is where his loyalties are but I have to agree with kirko because niko cant expect maya to be single for ever but her brother should be glad that it is august that like maya instead of some random. Right about now Donovan is getting on

Chapter 7: I find it so cute that maya is worried that august will forget about her once niko comes home it is clearly that she had develop some feelings towards him because clearly this is not even a crush any more but damn I can tell that maya wanted to let august sample a little bit of her goods but she didn't want him to seems that she was easy. LOL but august ass isn't shit for the shit that he just pulled with maya lol. But right about now they are both lying to each other because clearly

they need to get together already because there little moment alone together was just too cute and maya already gave august his own nick name already