First of all, I wrote the story itself when I was sixteen. It wasn’t initially Jeongcheol but the idea and overall structure was it. Needless to say that sixteen year old me was shitty at writing. Second, The character development is sub-par, it is quite OOC and badly constructed. Then, the fact that it’s a 15k story literally means that I rushed so many parts and wrote so many things recklessly for the sole reason of filling out space. The transitions were literal crap, you can see that i made no efforts to link the scenes. Although some dialogue was witty, most of the dialogue was over the top and cringe-worthy. It’s honestly the worst thing I’ve ever written in my opinion and that says a lot because my writing is not exactly the best (it’s shit.)