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- Hobble | Writes | Arts | Games - Most of what you'll find here is a lot about Pokemon and a smattering of various other games, shows, movies, etc. As a heads-up, when I post about a series I'm into it generally is not spoiler-free. I'll occasionally post plush, art, and fic that I've made, but unless otherwise stated am not open for commissions or requests. //tumblr icon created by my friend Ludashiki//
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I think one of my favorite creative joys is seeing how many different things people can do with the same concept. give ten writers the same starting point, or basic plot, or set of tropes to use and you're still going to get wildly different end results

the details you focus on, the ones you omit, turns of phrase, tone, and framing, the cadence and tempo of the sentences themselves, all the little fingerprints you've left littered across the prose — how you tell the story matters, and your personal voice is what makes it unique

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cluuny

*NOTE: in this case, phobia refers to a very strong irrational fear, not being a little scared of something. if you can handle snakes but they make you nervous, that's not a phobia.

huge thank you to people reblogging and talking about their phobias in the tags. it's genuinely super nice to hear that im not alone in this and im not super irrational for being scared of things. <3

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hey boss i can't come in today it's a sunny day and there's a lovely breeze coming in through my window, yeah it's rustling the branches of the tree outside that's finally bloomed so it's pretty serious

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ernmark

In writing, epithets ("the taller man"/"the blonde"/etc) are inherently dehumanizing, in that they remove a character's name and identity, and instead focus on this other quality.

Which can be an extremely effective device within narration!

  • They can work very well for characters whose names the narrator doesn't know yet (especially to differentiate between two or more). How specific the epithet is can signal to the reader how important the character is going to be later on, and whether they should dedicate bandwidth to remembering them for later ("the bearded man" is much less likely to show up again than "the man with the angel tattoo")
  • They can indicate when characters stop being as an individual and instead embody their Role, like a detective choosing to think of their lover simply as The Thief when arresting them, or a royal character being referred to as The Queen when she's acting on behalf of the state
  • They can reveal the narrator's biases by repeatedly drawing attention to a particular quality that singles them out in the narrator's mind

But these only work if the epithet used is how the narrator primarily identifies that character. Which is why it's so jarring to see a lot of common epithets in intimate moments-- because it conveys that the main character is primarily thinking of their lover/best friend/etc in terms of their height or age or hair color.

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worried that thing you put in your art or writing or game or music is too self-indulgent, too self-referential, too niche for anyone but yourself? fear not! you can do whatever you want forever. and you should.

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pancakeke

I am totally willing to accept unexplained light sources in movies if that means those movies won't be dark as fuck for the 90+ minutes they run

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crazy-pages

The light! Comes! From! The same! Place! As! The music!

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helperhoopoe

remember to cry for help without guilt-tripping. i know it feels like you’ve been abandoned and betrayed, but it’s probably not true, and it’s not okay to accuse the people around you of something they might not have done.

“i guess none of you like me” could be better phrased as “i feel unloved right now”

“but nobody cares anyway” could be better phrased as “i feel insignificant and i need reassurance”

rather than assuming others’ feelings, give them time to explain them. you’ll usually get a much better answer.

Guilt-tripping people while asking for help is also a great way to create a self-fulfilling prophecy. You fear that you’re unwanted or unlovable, so you act in a way that is alienating and upsetting for those around you, thus driving them away. It’s understandable to think those things when you’re feeling terrible, but talking like that to people is almost guaranteed to make people less willing to help. Nobody wants to be manipulated or told how crappy they are while helping someone through a crisis. 

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I've heard of "they would not fucking say that" but I also sometimes feel like. Not only would they not say that, they specifically said the opposite of that and I know you all know it

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List of Questions to Ask Yourself When a Story Feels Stuck

Basic Human Needs

  • When was the last time you took a break?
  • Are you mentally/emotionally/physically exhausted?
  • Have you recently had anything substantial to eat/drink?

Basic Writer Needs

  • How are you feeling? Examine any negatives. Self-doubt, jealousy, anxiety, etc. Why are you feeling this way? Did something prompt it? Reach out to others if you can.
  • Have you been writing in the same place for too long? Using the same playlist? Try changing it up.
  • When was the last time you took in creative media from someone else? Books, podcasts, movies, tv? Seek out stories other than your own. 
  • Are you falling into the trap of expecting perfection when there is no such thing?

Focus on the trouble spot

  • Do you know where you want your characters to be after the part you’re stuck on? 
  • Can something new be introduced? A ticking time bomb, a surprise attack, a betrayal, a murder, a confession? 
  • Do you like the constraints you’ve set up for yourself? That is, the setting, the characters present, the ‘props’ at their disposal? Anything you can add, change, or take away?
  • Reread the last couple of scenes before your trouble spot. Is there a way you could rewrite/detour the trajectory in a new, not stuck direction? 

The bigger picture

  • Do you know how the story ends?
  • Does your outline need to change? Would it help you to make an outline?
  • How do you want the events of this ‘stuck scene’ to affect the rest of the plot? Is there a different way to create the same results?
  • Are the characters acting in a way that doesn’t work with the plot? Which are you willing to change, the characters or the plot?
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Got tagged by my friend @actingwithportals for the Last Line Challenge, where you post the last sentence you wrote for a current wip! This is from the upcoming final chapter of my Cranechel fic An Irregular Regimen:

Satisfaction swam through his veins like it was on an IV drip.
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