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                             ——————————-             THE  WORLD  BENEATH  HIS  FEET  SITS         thick with overgrowth, a dystopian morgue of greenery mingling with rotten flesh.    but here, see, he is   WIDE FREE.     here, in this empty, remorseless forest, here, down this beaten path, now hardly even visible under a dense layer of crisp leaves;  the smell of the earth pungent an aroma that seems to take seat   c l e a n s i n g  him, from the inside out.      (    was it fair to say that he was rotten too ?   just as the undead are ?    if not    W O R S E  ?    )      instinct tells him to keep his fingers tight on the hilt of his combat knife, but training, skill, keeps him wary of his rifle.   he’s always been a formidable gun-man.

now stood,  expectant,  under the branches of an ageing oak tree,  he can’t help but absorb himself into the anonymous wonderment of a moment’s peace out here.    time to reflect comes few and far between.    this leaves as swiftly as it arrives as he tells himself to keep his muddy eyes peeled on his surroundings ;    not to get too caught up in the euphoria of the wood smell and the birdsong ;     and to   STAY  FOCUSED.

       he knew rick grimes was a    THREAT   out here now.        even he.

but perhaps he’d have told the others back at the sanctuary that he was simply going out on his own for a while.    perhaps he was explaining this uncharacteristic venture off into the wilderness a tactical move.     perhaps he’d given up his time in the pit for a while to seek out a face he once knew.     someone who had    n o   i d e a    he was even there.    so maybe this was a stupid idea    ——————–    he thinks that,  over and over,  as time wanes onward.    as the height of the scorching blaze in the sky starts to lower ;     as his wariness peaks,  then dips,  then peaks again.     as he sinks his teeth into the third protein bar he’d had that day.     as he wonders,   what the hell am i doing.

he’s out there a day,  on his own,  until anything of note happens.    and surprisingly,  it’s exactly the reason he came out here in the first place.

the rifle’s aimed at rick square on,  as he steps from where he’d been slumped by a tree ;     drowsy,  fresh from sleep,  but somehow still   VIBRANTLY AWAKE.    ignoring how his stomach growls at him,  ignoring how it churns with anxiousness,     he bites his own bullet ;      chews it up,  spits it out.    HE WILL GET ANSWERS,   now,   for their meeting not so long ago.     he will get what he has deserved for all these years.

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‘     ———————        you armed ?    ’
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               HE  TREADS  UPON  A  SEA  OF  RED.  gasping. heaving. choking amid the toxins that float like invisible dust in the air   ;   knowingly infiltrating his nostrils.  a trespasser inside his body.  a machine in works of creating the infamous flesh devouring monster, waiting to be released into the rotting world. he bleeds a deathless PLAGUE. an undying contagion yearning to swallow him whole.  a grotesque purpose rick would fight for as long as the leaves turned color during their respective seasons.  the plant adapts  &  so would rick  ;  to temperature, to conditions,  &  to people. though, normally, a person altered their lifestyle when inhabiting the same space as rick grimes  (  if they knew what was good for them.  )  luckily,  alexandria abided to just that.   

 &  maybe that’s why his judgement is effortlessly trusted.  his  experience as a silent guide to those he now called family.  how they could effortlessly put their protection in his hands.  rick is a leader.  he always has been  &  it’s a title he will fight for with bruised knuckles  &  broken bone.  always on edge. always ALERT.  any threat to rick or the group was eliminated with no chance of escape. stabbed, shot, beaten. whatever fate had in store. murder raged through his veins when the gun was held promptly against his temple. if not for a lucky strike of turning his head he’s have stabbed an old friend between the eyes like another other roamer  &  not thought twice about doing so.

even then rick had second thoughts about a meeting in the woods.  DANGEROUS ?  yes. for all rick knew he was being led to a trap. ira posed every kind of threat to his  &  the group’s well-being.  this world turns you  (  in more ways than one  )  into something you’d only see in your dreams  --- your nightmares.  countless times he’d turned his heel, made his way back to the safe-zone for a good minute  &  then repeat this motion the other way.  surprisingly,  walkers didn’t seem to disturb the area.  that isn’t to say the shuffle of decaying remains never touched the grass  ;   no ground was sacred. a few steps forward now.  of course he’d brought a knife to a gun fight.

upon observing the other before he’d noted ira’s appearance  ;  hair uncut  &  untamed, stubble peppered along the younger’s jaw  &  chin, skin blushed of dirt  &  mud, as any survivor should look ---  TIRED, ratted. aged not of fine wine, but of experience  &  life. it’s surreal gazing ‘pon the man sat while chowing a bar of food  (  granola, maybe ?  )  &  ever so quietly rick finalizes the arrival of his destination with one hand in the air.

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  ❛  never promised not t’be. safety precaution  ----------  RIGHT ?  ❜ 

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Advice: Don't Write Out Accents

Anonymous asked: How would you write an accent? One of my main characters is a British guy my other main character meets at university, and I want his accent to be apparent, rather than just simply saying he has a British accent.

Believe me, you don’t want to write an accent. Writing accents requires all sorts of spelling and grammatical acrobatics that are offensive, distracting, and confusing to the reader.  When writers fixate on a character’s accent, it’s a vanity issue that has to be let go. A person’s accent is not what’s important about them, and it shouldn’t be so important in a character that it has to be spelled out. It’s far more important to establish where the character is from and let the reader imagine the accent for themselves, however they imagine it. If the accent they hear in their heads is different than the one you intended, it will have zero affect on the character and the story. Instead of spelling out the accent, research the slang and other verbal cues spoken in the specific area your character is from. Then, have the narrator, the character, or another character establish where the foreign character is from, and incorporate the slang and other cues into their dialogue. For example, if I tell you my character is from Texas and then she walks into a room and says, “Hey, ya’ll! Come on inside and get yourself some sweet tea,” you probably heard that in a southern accent as you read. If you didn’t—does it matter? :) Here’s another post I did on writing accents.

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          ok listen.

          i understand that, in excess, writing out an accent can be both tedious and confusing. but if you actually do your research and you put thought and effort into what your character is saying and how you’re writing it out, accents serve to IMMERSE the reader in your writing.

          sometimes a character’s accent is important. and you know what ?? maybe someone doesn’t want to keep reminding the reader the their character is from a certain place. especially if you’re roleplaying and it’s an oc !! because holy cow if your character isn’t canon and your partners aren’t necessarily super invested in your oc, they can ( and likely will ) forget where they’re from, and won’t go check your pages to remember.

          and let’s not forget that writing is what you make of it !! there are plenty of amazing ( and famous ) authors that write out the accents in their stories. there are also plenty that don’t. so do whatever you want with your character’s dialogue, and don’t let someone on the internet tell you that you can’t or that you shouldn’t.

          also—– i just wanted to point out that, as someone said in their tags on this post, the fact that this post literally says HEY Y’ALL COME ON INSIDE AND GET YOURSELF SOME SWEET TEA is more offensive than someone that’s actually trying to write a decent accent. talk about stereotyping. :)

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❝ I’m not like you. I’m sorry you miss me, but I’m not like you. ❞

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                     ❛   ———–  ❜    he  lacks  the  astonishment  one  would  display  ‘pon  seeing  an  old  friend.  consolation  does  wash  over  his  body  like  a  cool  relief  from  the  hot  sun  the  moment  blues  meet  her  hazel’s.  she  is  a  SURVIVOR,  much  like  him  &  had  her  own  freewill  to  do  whatever  she  pleased.  rick  had  no  control  over  that.  he  had  no  choice.  it  was  her  decision  to  leave  for  the  second  time.  without  warning.  without  a  goodbye.  suppose  it  was  better  that way.  maybe  they’d  grown  too  close  for  comfort.   missing  her  wasn’t  an  option.

    ❛   i never said y’were.  i said you were family here. you are and you are needed, lara.  STAY.  ❜

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scandal sentence starters aka lots of angst, sex, and murder.

damnbutcher:
send one for my muses reaction! Feel free to change any gender or anything that needs changing in order for it to make sense to have come from your muse.
It’s only day 2 for this shirt, and these panties are fresh from the dryer. ❞ ❝ I don’t need you to forgive me. I haven’t done anything wrong. ❞ ❝ I’ve always forgiven you until now. ❞ ❝ I can never tell if you’re lying. I can never trust my gut when it comes to you. ❞ ❝ Are you spying on me? You don’t trust me? ❞ ❝ How do I choose the box to bury my friend in? ❞ ❝ If he dies, he can’t talk. Dead men tell no tales. ❞ ❝ When you walk in here, you make me hope. Hoping is bad for me, so do not come back here unless you are back for good. ❞ ❝ When it’s your turn, you can talk, but right now, be quiet. Let yourself be kissed. ❞ ❝ It’s always his turn, despite the fact that I’m the one you like to ride, that I’m the one that makes you moan, that I’m the one who reaches you in places that he can’t begin to touch. ❞ ❝ We can hide in the shadows or we can stand in the light. ❞ ❝ I’m not gonna live in your apartment, waiting to service you. I have things to do. I’m busy. But, I did book a nice hotel suite for booty calls. ❞ ❝ Do you actually think I give a damn what anyone thinks of me anymore? ❞ ❝ A broken heart is a broken heart; to take a measure is cruelty. ❞ ❝ You can’t summon me. You are not in charge of me. ❞ ❝ Did you think I’d want you back? ❞ ❝ I am less than interested in whatever it is you have to offer. ❞ ❝ You thought I would be dragged in here and I’d lay eyes on you and I’d gasp, and I’d rip off all my clothes and crawl on my knees over to you and beg you to take me, that I’d be some kind of sad porn fantasy. ❞ ❝ I could have anything I wanted, and I wanted you. You can laugh at it and make fun of me, but the truth is, nobody else wants you. ❞ ❝ I’ve lost too much. I’ve given up too much. I’m not even a person anymore. ❞ ❝ I’m not like you. I’m sorry you miss me, but I’m not like you. ❞ ❝ Why are you picking a fight with me today? ❞ ❝ You’re thirsty, but you’re not here for a drink.❞ ❝ You’re here because you want what you’ve been fantasizing about ever since you left the other night. ❞ ❝ I can give you what you want just the way you want it. ❞ ❝ You either go home alone and try your own hand at quenching that thirst or go upstairs with me and replace that dry lump in your throat with something much more satisfying. ❞ ❝ Trust me; I will be the one standing over you when you die. ❞ ❝ You keep secrets from me. You make me feel small. ❞ ❝ Burying yourself in work isn’t always the best thing when you lose someone. ❞ ❝ I’ve got enough blood on my hands already. ❞ ❝ Don’t ever leave me like that again. I almost didn’t survive. I almost died without you. ❞ ❝ You have been waiting for this moment from the second I got in bed with her. ❞ ❝ It doesn’t matter what the truth is, does it? The only thing that matters is that I put my hands where you think they don’t belong, and now I’m in chains. ❞ ❝ I am going to have you destroyed. ❞ ❝ He’s a predator, an animal, a killing machine, and just because you’ve decided to turn a blind eye to that doesn’t make it any less true. ❞ ❝ I think you want me to be guilty. Guilty lets you hate me for things you’re not allowed to hate me for. ❞ ❝ If there’s any part of you, any part of you at all, that believes that I’m telling you the truth, you’ll help me. ❞ ❝ You may have never heard what it sounds like when she wakes up screaming from a nightmare, but I have, and it’s awful. ❞ ❝ The truth is like the sun. You can shut it out for a while, but it’s not gonna go away. ❞ ❝ Since us bitches have got to get through this dog and pony show, I’m gonna need you to sit down, shut up, and follow my lead. ❞ ❝ Is she right about you having nightmares? ❞ ❝ Don’t let love cloud your judgment. ❞ ❝ We both know in the end you’re not going to choose me. And that’s okay. I want you to know, I need you to know, not choosing me is okay. ❞ ❝ I keep my promises. I will watch the life fade from your eyes. ❞ ❝ I love her. Does that matter to you at all? ❞ ❝ It stops you every time, the arrogance, the need to swagger, to show everyone who you are. ❞ ❝ True power hides in plain sight. ❞ ❝ You and I are ruined. We don’t have a chance now. Too much has happened. ❞ ❝ I know you’re trying to be rational, and I understand why, but you can’t pretend this is okay. ❞ ❝ I mean, I figure we have two choices here - we can either pretend this unbearable sexual tension doesn’t exist, or we can address it head-on. ❞ ❝ You are beautiful. The face that launched a thousand ships. ❞ ❝ What is it that is so special about you? You have so much power over him. He revolves around you. ❞ ❝ He needed you. He was in pain. He wanted to die. ❞ ❝ I could protect him from everyone. Except you. ❞ ❝ I wanted to shoot him. I didn’t, but I wanted to. I wanted to kill him. I wanted him dead. ❞ ❝ I’m very powerful, you know. Some women would find that a turn-on. ❞ ❝ Let’s just say I’m in a giving mood tonight. ❞
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i don't actually know if rick's a good noodle anymore but i like your portrayal because, simply put, you write him. you don't get caught up in whether or not his decisions or just, you don't glorify the good things he does or demonize the bad. he just is, you make him a person and understand his speech patterns, thought process and narration so well. thank you for being here, i adore you!!

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               tbh  i’m  not  sure  myself  whether  or  not  rick  is  a  good  noodle. i  suppose  he  acts  like  both  a  good  &  a  bad  noodle. furthermore  to  the  sentence  you  wrote  about  him  being  human !  that  really  meant  a lot  to  me.  esp  since  the  writers  had  him  become  this  cocky  &  immortal  man  in  the  second  half  of  season  six  only  to  be  brought  of  his  high  horse  in  the  last  episode.  i  try  not  to  make  him  seem  like  the  most  perfect  man  because  he  isn’t  &  there’s  no  reason  to  write  him  without  flaws,  but  there’s  also  no  reason  to  write  him  with  every  flaw.  as  for  narration  &  thought  process,  thank  you !  i’ve  put  alot  of  time  into  studying  both  his  mannerisms  &  inside  thoughts.  you  are  very  sweet  for  taking  the  time  to  send  me  a  message  like  this  &  i  adore  you  too,  lovely i  hope  your  summer  is  going  well  c:

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