Hey do you think if I asked you a question we could get one of those mini sneak peeks of a short ?😏😏
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This one courtesy of ladyanj:
Thanks to ishifishy17 and be-crazy-and-carefree (And, of course, ladyanj‘s pancake crisis), you get a double long sneak peek!
We we be getting an epilogue anytime soon...😊😊
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Sorry was just so excited... I can't even!!!!!
I can finally see the light at the end of this tunnel! I have two major scenes left to write, plus the wrap up at the end which won’t take long, word-count wise, but which will be extra special because it’s, you know, the end, so it will take a little time. I think we’re probably looking at 15,000 words, maybe 16,000 words by the time all is said and done. It’s long and it’ll be up late, but it WILL be done tonight :D :D :D I hope everyone is rinsing with fluoride to prepare their teeth for the pure sugary fluff that’s about to ensue!
So so so excited for that second epilogue!! Will it be out tonight? No rush!!
I think a sneak peek tonight, and the chapter tomorrow! That will give me a whole extra day to make things sparkly for you. What to expect in this chapter: Astra meeting AddyASPEN meeting Addy :D :D :DMaxon’s absA trip to the steps of the Palace to present the heir to the KingdomA special letter from Amberly…And much, much more!
Epilogue II, Sneak Peek
“I think she’s soothed by our voices.” Maxon smiled, gently massaging the baby’s back with his hand.
“That’s not what I remember. I distinctly remember a squirming, hyper baby whenever she heard your voice.”
Maxon grinned down, memorizing the features of that brand new face, so like his own and like America’s at the same time. “She needs to rest up a little, then she’ll start dancing again whenever she hears me talking.”
“Are you tired, little one?” America asked, speaking directly to her daughter for the first time. “Was being born hard work?”
As if responding to the question, the baby lazily yawned and scrunched up her little face. A moment later, she strained her eyelids open for the very first time.
Maxon and America both gasped, and Maxon moved his face closer, so that he was nose to nose with the baby. “Hello, my love. Hello. You’ve just opened your eyes, can you tell? Can you see me? I’m the colorful blob right in front of you, it’s me. It’s Daddy.”
Exhausted from the effort, the baby’s eyes drifted closed again.
America felt hot tears on her cheeks again. Maxon lifted his face to grin up at her.
“I just… I love that you were the first thing she ever saw.” America said, simply.
Maxon beamed back at her, “Happy?”
“So happy.” America nodded.
“Tired?”
America laughed, “So tired. But I don’t want to sleep yet. I want to stay awake as long as I can, and be with her.”
“Alright.” Maxon agreed, settling back down. He brushed a finger across the baby’s forehead, “You should cry some more, little love. You need to help keep Mommy awake.”
America peered up at him, studying Maxon’s face closely. When he met her gaze, she nodded her head a little to get him to lean in closer. Maxon eagerly obeyed, and when he was close enough, America gave him a long, subdued, lingering kiss.
Rules America broke during the Selection
Well, let’s see….
1. Meeting Maxon before the Selection
2. Insulting him when he gave her what she wanted
3. Kneeing him in the groin
4. Not to mention her not keeping one of her maids in her room at night
5. Telling Maxon she broke curfew on a regular basis
6. Hearing about the Rebel attack during the photoshoot
7. Calling him Maxon instead of Prince Maxon during the Report interview
8. Her letting Aspen come in to her room and kiss her
9. Receiving Gregory’s diary (even though Maxon gave it to her)
10. Going into that room in general
11. Telling her father about the book
12. Is dancing with Aspen at the Halloween party one?
13. Running to Marlee to try and stop her caning
14. Fighting Celeste
15. Meeting Aspen afterwards
16. Her hearing from Aspen about the southern provinces and the king’s demoting of sympathizers
17. When Maxon left for New Asia and she met up/made out with Aspen
18. Reading the military report on the rebel attacks
19. Oh, and let’s definitely not forget her suggesting to undo the social system of Illéa on national television
20. Knowing the secret about Maxon’s back.
21. Is attempting to seduce Maxon one?
22. Sneaking out of the palace with Maxon to meet August and Georgia, well after curfew I might add
23. Suggesting that she asks Nicoletta to give money to the Northern rebels. (That could be considered treason)
24. “Technically” jacking up the Convicting
25. And finally, after Maxon proposed to her, she’s caught with Aspen
Yup, America broke a lot of rules. But Maxon chose her anyway and we love him for that
Um let’s not forget the night they almost frickle frackled shall we
Epilogue II, Sneak Peek
“Seven pounds, four ounces.” Dr. Ashlar announced, intentionally loud enough so that America could hear him over the crying. “Eighteen inches long. She’s little, but she’s responsive. I’ll be running lots of tests on her over the next few days, but for now, I have no reason not to declare her medically healthy.”
Maxon let out a laugh that sounded almost like a holler of joy, setting aside his camera to cuddle his daughter again. “Healthy.” He said the word like he’d never heard of anything so wonderful before.
Dr. Ashlar gently placed a hand on Maxon’s shoulder, which caught America’s attention. He’d known not to clap down, not to pat Maxon on the back. She wondered if he’d treated Maxon’s wounds at some point in his childhood, before Maxon got his own box of medical supplies. Or maybe Dr. Ashlar had never treated Maxon’s back, but had come across the scars during some other type of examination. Either way, he knew how to avoid triggering those memories at a moment like this, as Maxon held his minutes-old daughter. America was so grateful.
“Come. Let’s put a diaper on that baby and get her to her mother.” Dr. Ashlar grinned, and Maxon smiled over at him.
“You’ll tell me how, won’t you? I’ve never done this before.” Maxon nervously wheezed a laugh as Dr. Ashlar led him back to the changing table and released his shoulder.
“It’s not hard. Here. Can you tell which side is the front?” Dr. Ashlar held up one of the unspeakably tiny diapers and rotated it.
“Um… I think it’s this one.” Maxon nodded, since both of his hands were supporting his newborn.
“That’s right.” Dr. Ashlar nodded. “See? No problem. Just stretch it out, lay it down, and put your baby on it.” He coached Maxon through the diapering with the air of a proud father. When they were done, Dr. Ashlar lifted the baby girl up and turned to America. “Now that he knows what he’s doing, he can change all the diapers from here on out.”
Maxon laughed and America smiled weakly and swallowed to clear the lump in her throat at the sight of her baby wearing its first little diaper. “The clean ones are the easy part, it’s the dirty ones that are tricky.” she said, drawing from her experience assisting her mother when Gerad had been in diapers.
“Well, we’ll get him trained up soon enough, won’t we?” Dr. Ashlar grinned between them.
Not sure when it will be finished, but I do have a draft of this part 👍😃
How long do you think the 2nd epilogue will be??
I’m looking at what I have outlined and what I have written so far, and I think it could fall anywhere between 15,000 and 20,000 words. It’s going to be huge 😬
Flirting According to America: 1. Hyperventilate 2. Cry 3. Kick him 4. Tell him your life story 5. Kiss another guy 6. Get hated by his father 7. Get married