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woe, razbobby blast

@mirchloe

former secret santa blog repurposed for fics, headcanons, analysis posts, etc about pn! https://archiveofourown.org/users/kibasniper
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funniest thing about them as kids is when bobby looks down and flinches because he sees mirtala and chloe staring at him with their big ol' eyes like this since they're about to drag him into something that could result in him exploding.

"bobby, would you lend us a hand by helping to set up bottle rockets across the lake? they have a chance of blowing up in our hands due to the unsteady materials we had to use." "please please pleeeease?" "we would feel safer as a fathian like you is used to detonating dangerous and possibly deadly instruments." "please please please please pleeeeease?" "you can say no, of course, but we would really appreciate it." "please please please please please please please pleeeeeease?"

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bobby thinks mirtala has sprinted off for the day, but chloe is quick to realize that mirtala has perched in his hair, and bobby is completely unaware. the zwickian and fathian dynamic is truly fascinating. bobby only realizes she's there with a shriek when mirtala sneezes because a stray matted curl tickled her nose. why is she in there? because his hair is a great springboard.

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thinking about the mirchloebobby trio...it's the way they automatically believe she's an alien that makes her drawn to them at first. chloe doesn't have many friends - she has lili and milka and quentin but they don't believe like mirtala and bobby do. they go along with it, nonjudgmental, unlike mirtala and bobby, who go all in. they find her fascinating! she's an alien! from *outer space!* she talks so much about the greater galactic community and her rich history in a way that stokes their imagination and wonder, and they want to listen to her! they want to hear what she has to say, and chloe, in all her oddness, is able to be her most authentic self. she *is* her authentic self all the time, but bobby and mirtala are as all in as she is. chloe can tell them anything. she can show them anything. they'll ask questions and let her talk and talk.

and that's where bobby and mirtala differ! bobby wouldn't think of interrupting, unless she's asking what he thinks or what his people would do. mirtala is a yapper! she'll match chloe's tempo and keep the conversation going for hours! she'll backflip while she talks, too, and she might get confused, but that just means chloe can explain herself even more.

when chloe needs to be alone, wanting some silence, mirtala doesn't mind. she has two moody older siblings, so she gets chloe needs her "me time." she'll go explore! and bobby knows he isn't being rejected. that's just who chloe is, and she's the coolest kid in camp, so he'll hang out with her later. (plus, he can go collect arrowheads for his protection services without her noticing! it's a win win. he said he'd stop bullying, yeah, but they're working on him.)

as for mirtala and bobby, she's too bubbly for him, and she likes bothering him! she's scampering after him. he doesn't scare her. she's cartwheeling around his tk hand. he's jealous, obviously, but she's not rejecting him either, so he's left in a weird position where he hates that she's wedging in between him and chloe, but she's also inviting him to tea parties and trying to get him to be a clown with her (which is lame, but...the scones are good).

chloe gets to have two friends who are all in for her! and she's grabbing both of their hands. and mirtala is grabbing bobby's hand. trying to teleport to outer space through their combined psychic power, even if it fails. she's making sure they have room on her spaceship! and when she says she wants to dissect them, bobby is flattered! mirtala says chloe will have to catch her first. (lili did not know how to take chloe's dissection comment at first, but ended up nodding along.)

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and just going off that last post of mine, but that cutscene really shows a stark change in writing between the first and second game. to save his friends and mentors, raz bounces into each inmate's brain without much thought. he initially isn't doing it to help them get better - he needs something from them. though, raz does end up directly helping edgar and fred as they take on a more active role in their minds, and raz, after talking to them and learning about them, is compelled to help! he wants to! he's an earnest kid and seeing people in trouble? he wants to do what he can to see them at their best, but when he fails with a character like boyd, and raz is ejected after letting the milkman loose, the consequences are pretty...explosive. however, raz doesn't see this outcome; he just knows the asylum is suddenly burning down, and then, he's off to face oleander.

hollis is a direct result of his actions, and he is forced to face them because of raz messing around with her mental connections, she becomes a compulsive gambler. she feels like she lost her mind when it's cleared up, and when she learns what raz did, she's *pissed*. what raz did was dangerous and wrong. he jeopardized not only her, but everyone on the mission. raz sees this now very clearly and learns that he can't mess around like he did. most of what he was doing was based on what seemed best in the moment. now, he learned to be more considerate and careful or what he can do in someone's mind, accepting their boundaries, learning "maybe i shouldn't toss my psi portal willy nilly."

but this brings me back to sasha. sasha's morals were seen as a more than a little dubious in the first game. while he wants to help kids, he also wants to vastly explore the human mind and enhance his understanding. the untapped potential of children, especially those he believes can withstand advanced training, are incredibly valuable. he can't, however, do it directly. it's all under the table. even though oleander and milla are aware, neither step in, and the kids are allowed to run free with the rumor mill. bobby is a result of sasha's training, of how dubious ethics regarding the mind of a child, can lead to harm. and as for raz, he, too, is a result of it. raz emulates sasha, so sasha expressing his frustration with raz comes as the expense of me knowing...that this is something raz did because of his experiences with sasha. it's never acknowledged, and i do feel that's a bit of a shame, especially with much they parallel each other. raz feels he let sasha down, and while it is still primarily his fault, their conversation on ethics would've been so much greater if sasha had expounded on how he influenced raz to act carelessly.

and as for the writing, those cutscenes just wouldn't have happened in pn1! it shows a true growth for raz as a character, in how he realizes he needs to let his empathy be more genuine, in how he needs to respect the boundaries of the people he wants to help. he can help them, but it has to be at their pace, and they need to accept his assistance instead of it being forced upon them.

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while i'm still logged in, i think my biggest story criticism for pn2 is how it's sasha reprimanding raz for what he does to hollis...when sasha is in the same boat lmao. now, i'm not saying "bad writing" or something, but it does contrast with sasha's character seen in the first game.

sasha is the one inviting students for advanced training that isn't quite approved. using the brain tumbler to get into kid's heads is definitely not permitted by the motherlobe - it circumvents the psychic kids protection act or whatever it's called - but he's doing it anyway. with the kid's consent, this is seen as acceptable in sasha's eyes, in which he is then allowed to gather data while the student is in a seemingly safe environment - or so it seems, as with whatever happened to bobby wasn't good. (i know some interpret this as a bad trip to the gpc, but since bobby freaks out specifically over the red button, i think it had to do with sasha's training and the brain tumbler. he also was fine to trap maloof in the gpc, and if he was so afraid of the gpc itself, he would've steered clear from it and just kept locking maloof in the outhouses.)

through sasha, raz gets a pretty warped idea of what's acceptable to do in someone's mind. i think i would've liked to see some acknowledgment of sasha's own actions in that specific cutscene where he chews in to raz. maybe admit that his own ethics were a bit skewed when he took raz under his wing for advanced training while still drilling home how raz was in the wrong for what happened to hollis and the abrupt, dangerous changes in her mind (regardless of any peer pressure from the interns). it just makes me cock my head to the side knowing that it's sasha being that upset when just days ago, he was the one showing raz his slightly dubious nature when it comes to getting consent to enter a mind.

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finally getting back to b-movie since i finished up a piece for a sonic event! i do have some dialogue written, but boy oh boy, am i delighted to connect one specific scene that happens way earlier on in the fic to raz and bobby talking. that's just one bit out of connecting a lot of earlier scenes to them just talking about what happened over the course of the day and more.

just generally and separately talking, too, but i'm glad i didn't have chloe find out. i keep thinking about a specific scene in my head - this time, other than chloe happening upon the conversation between gisu and oleander, chloe would get a call in the lab from tala, and chloe's like "oh, greetings, tala, it's kind of late - wait, you sound really upset. what's wrong?" (pause) "bobby did WHAT?" and as funny as that it is out of context, man, i'm glad i went with chloe not knowing! because it connects to how bobby cut her out of his life. she wasn't fully aware of his dwindling mental state, wasn't aware of how her own insistence on helping him was actually making him realize just how much he was relying on her. it's an interesting aspect of isolation, in which bobby has completely cut ties while chloe still has ties to others...but she feels pretty damn lonely still because someone who was incredibly important to her snipped her out of his life and completely twisted her perspective on trust and friends and more. it's why she's alone in the lab! it was a visual element to show just how distant chloe has become from camp, from her peers, and how she's accepted that she's pretty alone.

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thinking about bobby and his archetypes getting up to mischief during his internship. there's three of them! there's him, there's you, there's me. bobby might be going through a revolving door of mentors, but he keeps putting of his pettier assignments to them like finding stuff. though, when he has free time, and ambassador has convinced him that staying inside his room all day isn't healthy (and strongman has already dove out his window to crash and explode outside), they're mucking it up in the questionable area! he probably is looking around for full psi cores to level up, or they're hanging around the diner, claiming a little corner as theirs, enacting three stooges scenarios. ambassador might try to act better, but unfortunately, he, too, is a bobby and must try and get a smack in when he's smacked.

i think bobby, when he patches things up with lili, pops into the secret area behind the waterfall using his archetypes's extendo-arms to hike it up the logs faster than using time bubbles. bobby gets in there, and his archetypes just poke their heads around him all "lili!!" when they find her sulking under a mushroom. not to worry, they brought more snacks and videos and a portable tv because they have six arms to go around.

and when they're glaring at raz, ambassador is...less angry. bobby and strongman try to stir shit with him, but ambassador is the one convincing them it isn't worth it. not that raz isn't worth it, but they have to focus on what's important, which includes not try to fistfight raz in the middle of wherever. sometimes, he gets a little too close to raz, scrutinizing him, and maybe...raz isn't that bad? they're at least being cordial, maybe even a little friendly when raz tries to talk with him, not at him like bobby when he's barking out an order. they're comparing missions! raz tells him about his missions while ambassador goes out long, gory spiels about how he fought against the trynaxians. raz reminds him that the trynaxian galaxy exploded over four hundred years ago. ambassador smirks and tells him that fathians invented time travel just to blow it up.

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kibasniper111 -> mirchloe

i was thinking of a pn name and had to go with my brand!! mirtala/chloe realness. very true. very powerful.

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kitty to lili when they break up during kitty's internship for the second time.

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