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@inbadshape

My whump blog! Queer, 30s, chronically ill/disabled. They/them. A lot of hospital/medical stuff, folks passing out, occasional sickfics, emotional whump/angst. Not super into torturer/whumper content. Warning: contains descriptions and images of violence, sickness, blood, injury
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whumpiary

does anyone have any resources/references for fat bodies in whumpy poses? i’m a reference-heavy artist and am struggling to find anything but thin/straight sized people

a lot of the bigger models I’ve found hold more ethereal/elegant poses which is lovely in its own right but not quite what i’m hoping for

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Delirium or fever or concussion or exhaustion playing havoc with a character's sense of time so that the flow of events gets a bit slippery and they have no conception of the length of time passing- the companion tending to them steps out for just long enough to brew a cup of tea or fetch another blanket and returns to a character sure they've been abandoned, left to fend for themself, drowning in loneliness-

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birdofmay

So we all know that Tumblr is US-centric. But to what degree? (and can we skew the results of this poll by posting it at a time where they should be asleep?)

Reblog to increase sample size!

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Ref Recs for Whump Writers

Violence: A Writer’s Guide This is not about writing technique. It is an introduction to the world of violence. To the parts that people don’t understand. The parts that books and movies get wrong. Not just the mechanics, but how people who live in a violent world think and feel about what they do and what they see done.

Hurting Your Characters: HURTING YOUR CHARACTERS discusses the immediate effect of trauma on the body, its physiologic response, including the types of nerve fibers and the sensations they convey, and how injuries feel to the character. This book also presents a simplified overview of the expected recovery times for the injuries discussed in young, otherwise healthy individuals.

Body Trauma: A writer’s guide to wounds and injuries. Body Trauma explains what happens to body organs and bones maimed by accident or intent and the small window of opportunity for emergency treatment. Research what happens in a hospital operating room and the personnel who initiate treatment. Use these facts to bring added realism to your stories and novels.

10 B.S. Medical Tropes that Need to Die TODAY…and What to Do Instead: Written by a paramedic and writer with a decade of experience, 10 BS Medical Tropes covers exactly that: clichéd and inaccurate tropes that not only ruin books, they have the potential to hurt real people in the real world. 

Maim Your Characters: How Injuries Work in Fiction: Increase Realism. Raise the Stakes. Tell Better Stories. Maim Your Characters is the definitive guide to using wounds and injuries to their greatest effect in your story. Learn not only the six critical parts of an injury plot, but more importantly, how to make sure that the injury you’re inflicting matters

Blood on the Page: This handy resource is a must-have guide for writers whose characters live on the edge of danger. If you like easy-to-follow tools, expert opinions from someone with firsthand knowledge, and you don’t mind a bit of fictional bodily harm, then you’ll love Samantha Keel’s invaluable handbook

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“you’re safe now.”

“you can rest now.”

“you’ve fought so hard.”

“you don’t have to fight anymore.”

“just sleep, okay?”

“i won’t let anything hurt you.”

“it’s over. it’s all over.”

“you don’t have to worry about anything right now.”

“shh, shh, i’ve got you. you’re safe here.”

“i know it was scary.”

“i know it hurts.”

“you’re all done hurting. there’s no more pain.”

“just focus on resting, okay?”

“you need to save your strength.”

“your job right now is to heal.”

“i’m getting you out of here.”

“i’m taking you home. we’re going home.”

“you’re safe in my arms. the hard part is over.”

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Noticing Trauma sentence starters

Feel free to alter dialogue to suit your muse!

  • “That really spooked you.” 
  • “I don’t want to pry, but.. I want you to know I also want to listen, if you want someone to talk to.” 
  • “Well, pretend I’m not here. What would you say if nobody could hear it?” 
  • “Does this happen a lot?” 
  • “Hey, what happened between you two?” 
  • “When is the last time you ate?”
  • “Is this okay?” 
  • “Hey.” 
  • “This is the third meal you’ve missed this week, are you okay?” 
  • “[Name]?” 
  • “What did he/she/they do?” 
  • “This … hurts you.” 
  • “You don’t feel safe, here.” 
  • “When you look at [trigger], you… what is that?” 
  • “What can I do?” 
  • “You were crying in your sleep.” 
  • “What do you dream about?” 
  • “Whenever you get stressed, you do this thing with your hands. What is it?” 
  • “You’re right, I don’t understand, yet. Will you help me?” 
  • “Should I leave a light on for you?” 
  • “I brought you some water.” 
  • “I won’t judge you.” 
  • “It doesn’t have anything to do with trust. You don’t have to tell me. But I’ll listen, if you do.” 
  • “Count your breaths with me, okay? Ready? One, two, three, four…” 
  • “I’m here.” 
  • “Talk to me.” 
  • “You don’t need to tell me everything. I just want to know how I can help.” 
  • “Let me hold your hair back, at least.” 
  • “You used to love that [item].” 
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Nice whumpy thing: when people are intensely pragmatic about their injuries illnesses.

“Listen, if I pass out…”

“If you let up pressure, I’ll bleed out. So just, don’t move.”

“I know it ill hurt, just do what you need to.”

#these are all so good #i’m always especially appreciative of the # ‘i’m going to scream. this is going to hurt and i won’t be able to help it. keep going anyway’ # but i think my very favorite is ‘you’re going to have to pin me down’ # (also this isn’t quite the same feeling but the polite ‘i’m sorry but i think i’m going to pass out now’ always delights me) (x)

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Me, writing innocently: This scene won’t be too angsty or tense, just some nice emotional angst maybe. Some fluff. Some sad blorbo feels. Me, two minutes later: and then he got held HOSTAGE

happens to the best of us 🤷🏻‍♀️

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