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*You hear a passing conversation

@echo--flowers--writes / echo--flowers--writes.tumblr.com

Hi! You can call me Echo! This is a sideblog were I put all of my writing and Undertale stuff (and you get to watch me simp for several skeletons XD). The ask box is always open so feel free to ask me stuff!~ Header by @citrus_captain on Picrew!
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Welcome!

Since the blog seems to be getting much bigger than I’d anticapated I thought it would be good to make an offical intorduction and write out some rules!

  • To start off, I’m Echo! Nice to meetcha! I slipped back into Undertale and have made a nice, comfy nest here! XD
  • I go by she/they
  • I primarily wrtie skeleton bros / reader fics because I'm a huge simp XD

Rules!

What I will write: 

  • SFW dabbles, imagines (reacations), and headcanons
  • Very light NSFW romance (like pg13 or teen stuff)
  • Angst, fluff, platonic, and romance
  • Romantic or platonic matchups
  • S/O / Reader dabbles, imagines, or headcanons
  • I also do worldbuilding! Please feel free to ask about it!

If there is something that you request that I didn’t mention, just send me an ask and I’ll let you know if I’m comfortable writing it! 

What I won’t write: 

  • Romantic relationship between an adult and a minor
  • Severe graphic violence/gore
  • Physical, emotional, or verbal abuse
  • Extreme NSFW (NSFW is only on AO3, so I can keep this blog safe for everyone)
  • Incest

Matchups!

Status: Closed

Requierments: Here!

Requests

Ask box status: Open!

Characters and Nicknames: Here!

You can send a request for headcanons, imagines/reactions and dabbles!

For headcanons I’ll only do one character at a time! For imagines/reactions, only request 6 characters at a time, please!

If you have any questions or need something tagged, please don’t hesitate to send an ask! My ask box is always open if any of you lovlies need to talk!

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hello llama

i have been thinking and headcanoning about vampire bad sanses lately, so i was curious if you have any thoughts about or interest in vampires of the nightmare and crew variety? (人 •͈ᴗ•͈)

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"do i have interest in vampires", he asks

ok, i will share my extensive vampire brainrot. but in return..... you have to write that vampire fic.... oooOOooO look into my eyes you know you want to write it ooOoOooo 😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫

I very much like the idea of Nightmare's castle being Castlevania-style. Lots of spooky architecture, lots of ancient magical passages that haven't been seen in centuries.

Horror can be summed up in one word. Bloodlust. There's a constant hunger inside him he can't ever seem to fill, driving him almost to the point of madness. He is more beast than man. When he smells or tastes blood, he loses control of himself, becoming little more than a starving wild animal - his capability for slaughter is limited only by his appetite. So unless Nightmare requires it, he generally abstains from blood. He doesn't like losing himself so entirely.

Something about you makes him forget his hunger. Is it your voice? Your scent? He has no idea, but oh, it feels good to feel whole. When you're around it's as if he'll never be hungry again... he follows you like a dog, grinning intensely every time you look at him. This is one hound that can't be shaken.

Despite his 'condition', he finds a lot of solace in cooking. Nothing will give him the same drug-like rush as blood but human food is nonetheless warm and filling and distracts him momentarily from the emptiness. He enjoys the process of making it, too, doing something with his hands. Let him cook for you, please? Watching you eat brings him vicarious joy.

Dust's backstory is one of legend. Something resembling a story can be spun from the loose whispers. A vampire invaded his peaceful isolated village hundreds of years ago, intending to turn the helpless populace into enslaved vampires. Dust, the first to be bitten, turned and slaughtered them all himself - and despite being a vampire for barely a week, the equivalent of a stumbling newborn, he killed the centuries-old invading vampire in single combat.

No one's quite sure why he's joined Nightmare. Perhaps Nightmare was keen to take this uniquely violent creature under his wing, and Dust just didn't really care where the wind took him. Or perhaps he has some other motive, hidden beneath that silent face. Who knows.

... Dust might be quiet, but it's obvious he's fixated on you. Which is a big deal. This is a creature who hasn't mustered a second thought for anything but blood for decades; but somehow, you've excited him. He's very clearly interested in you, silently watching your every move, listening intently to every word you say. Too bad he's not much for conversation.

Killer's backstory, on the other hand, is shrouded entirely in mystery. No one knows where he came from, who he is, or what he's done. He simply appeared one day - right within the coveted inner circle of Nightmare himself. He's the Night King's most trusted weapon, and the closest thing he has to a friend.

Killer seems very clear about what he wants. He thinks you're adorable, and he says you'd make such a pretty vampire. He talks (at length) about how much he wants to bite you, and how if it were up to him you'd already be one of them. A lot of his flirting involves calling you things like sweet treat and honeyblood. However... despite all the taunting, all the talk of seeing you as food, Killer is the one in the castle who treats you with the most respect. The others seem to see you as an object, a cute toy, something to squish and own. Killer talks to you like you're a real person. You can't help but like him for it.

Nightmare's inferiority complex has driven him to declare himself the king of the vampires. No one contests - Nightmare is royalty by blood, and vampires place a lot of emphasis on blood. But even if he wasn't, Nightmare frequently murders those who won't bend the knee. Plenty of powerful vampires have fallen embarrassingly fast at his hand.

... Nightmare's goal is to make you agree to be his spouse. A pretty little human partner would be excellent for his image. It would not only demonstrate his incredible self control as such an ancient vampire (not to mention his control over his warriors), but it would also show that his power is so great he doesn't need to strike a political marriage with another powerful vampire. It might also convince some of the pesky rebellious human groups to settle down.

His pride means that he won't force you. Not yet, at least. He likes to think he can seduce you. He's a royal vampire, after all, and you're just a simple human - isn't it only a matter of time?

... But it seems like, as time goes on... he's the one falling.

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capnhanbers
Anonymous asked:

hi hi!! do you have any advice on writing naturally flowing dialogue? istg every time i re-read JOAT the dialogue feels so natural and smooth and i can’t get enough

fuahfanahda how sweet 🥺 i love writing dialogue!! I'll just list some non specific advice lol

i try to be realistic. like can i actually imagine someone saying this? I'll say things out loud and think, does this flow? forget the thesaurus, what word do i instinctually want to say here, even if it's not the prettiest most accurate word? would i throw in an um or a like? would i laugh? etc etc

i say this a lot but i have a director approach to writing, so I'm always watching the characters in my head like they're actors performing this stuff. that said, drawing from scripted shows/movies is helpful, but my weird deeper recommendation is to pay attention to REALITY TV SHOW DIALOGUE. it's unscripted yet most contestants are pretty actor-adjacent so you'll find great lines scattered into more organic convos.

then it's not just the words. to me, gestures and pauses are huge. huge huge huge. don't be afraid to interrupt a line of dialogue to say what's going on with their hands, or where they're looking, or what's going on in their expression. again, this is all very visual for me, these are actors.

try to be true to your character's individual voices. this is pretty easy with utdr fanfiction since every voice is soooo distinct, but i keep my rules pretty simple. tori doesn't use contractions. simone doesn't cuss. em cusses A LOT. naya rambles, lots of likes and uhs. chara's an edgelord. and so on. voice comes naturally the more you write, but just give one or two simple rules to each character from the start.

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koobiie

shoutout to everyone who wants to infodump but cant string together coherent thoughts to form sentences and instead just look at you like this

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what people think is hard about writing: describing the joy, love, beauty, grief, loss and hope that form the richness of human experience

what is actually hard about writing: describing basic actions such as turning, leaning over, reclining, gesturing, saying something in a quiet voice, breathing, getting up from chairs, and walking across rooms

I’ll spill out a brilliant, wrenching portrayal of a character’s struggle with grief over a loss and his complex regrets and guilt and then a page later I’ll have to write that a character who’s lying prone raises his head and shoulders up to look at something without fully getting up and I’ll get so angry I want to strangle an eagle with my bare hands

this spoke to me

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redbowkid-27

A promise

Hell yeh im back

Enjoy this bruh hope so

My apologies if there are some misspelled words

Dusttale belongs to AskDustale

Now gotta gone for days again

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