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Alice Writes Sometimes

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Alice, she/her, Ace, Christian
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Masterpost!

I finally made a fancy masterpost like all the cool kids have!

Fandom: Linked Universe

When a Yiga clan ambush leaves Legend seriously wounded and Wild missing, the Chain sets out on a desperate quest to rescue their lost member before it's too late.

Contents: Kidnapping, torture, violence, hostage situations, angst

Fandom: The Silmarillion

When Galadriel finds the aftermath of a battle where orcs killed a group of Doriath's warriors, she sets out to avenge them. Soon, though, she finds that the orcs also took a prisoner.

Contents: Torture, rescue, injury, violence

The Mad King

When Lord Ned of Wildgarde is arrested and charged with treason, his younger brother Diccon is left to fight for his own life and freedom while Ned tries to convince his captors of their innocence.

Contents: Captivity, torture, underage whumpee (17), fear for loved one

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I finally updated!

It was getting so long I eventually decided I was going to have to cut the chapter in half again. Conveniently, this means that I can post something even though I'm still struggling with the big fight scene.

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If it's not too late: portrait?

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Legend shifts uncomfortably, gazing up at the portrait that rises before him, the captain’s familiar visage outlined in careful brushes of oil paint.
“Okay where the hell are we?” He asks the hero standing beside him.
“A place of evil,” is Time’s only reply before he waves a hand and flames devour the painting, turning it to nothing more than a pile of ash.
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Here’s my off-the-wall theory of the update:

(All images via @linkeduniverse)

So Sky can’t sense the portal with the Master Sword anymore. He could earlier, so what’s up? It could be any number of things, but here’s the weirdest one I thought of.

Dink made the portal a temporary one, one that would only last a certain number of hours, so that the Links couldn’t follow him. He probably expected Twilight to be laid up a little longer, so he thought it being open a bit longer (long enough for the mailman to go through, and Sky to find), wouldn’t be an issue. Yet they’re still a bit too late.

But if the portal’s gone, then what did Wolfie find here?

The boring explanation is he just found the mailman’s scent, and they’re going to follow that. (Or the portal is actually still there, and Twilight can smell/sense it).

The interesting (insane) explanation is that Twilight found a scent he didn’t recognize, figured it had to do with the portal, and is alerting the others to it, they’re going to follow the scent up to where the portal used to be, and find... *drumroll*

One of the two mystery banner Links!!!

FIRST FIRST FIRST FIRST

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cpt-winters
Technically Medieval Whump? - Team Leader Edition

"Cap- Captain…" Medic steadied their hands in front of them. "I need you to slow down, okay?"

Leader's brows creased, heart still frantically thumping as his fingers tightened around his sword, the soft dirt rubbing into his warm palm against the metal hilt.

"What are you doing? We got them on the run!" He stepped around his comrade, eyes fixed on the scattered enemies descending the rocky hill, their weathered helmets glinting under the setting sun. 

"We'll take care of that, just.." Medic stumbled back in front of him, hand outstretched as they took a cautious step forward. "..Stop moving."

Leader gritted his teeth, frustration rising as a hand clasped his shoulder. "Why are you-"

"Cap, try to stay calm."

He paused as Medic motioned someone from behind, the clang of metal and cries of battle all but forgotten as another set of hands latched behind him, leaving a strange sensation to settle in the pit of his stomach.

"Easy," another familiar voice ushered from behind. "I got you."

The captain's knees faltered, a strong grip quick to catch his weight as his gaze fell to his torso. A crimson-stained spear protruded through him, bits of skin smeared around the metal shaft and fleshy folds hung from its jagged head.

"It's okay- Don't look at that," his teammate behind him started. "It's alright. Medic's gonna fix you right up, okay?"

The warmth pooling around the grass under him said otherwise.

Back eased against the dirt, the captain raised shaky fingers to the weapon, shallow breath hitching before two calloused hands caught his.

"Don't.. lie to me," Leader gritted out, eyes glued to the passing clouds above, their orange hues easier to look at than those around him.

"I'm not. So don't you fucking quit on me."

The grip clasped around his bloodied palm tightened as his teammate went on, repeating the same assurances neither of them could truly believe.

Something for Warriors for later, maybe...

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I'm trying to prove a point to my brain: Reblog if you think fanfiction does not need sex to be good.

There is a trend I’ve noticed that smut fics tend to be much more popular than anything else and honestly I just want to have something to look at to remind myself and that writing doesn’t have to have sex to be worth putting out into the community.

Please, I'm begging you

- Your friendly neighborhood sex-repulsed asexual

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For the “tropes to rave about” list: When two characters have been whumped and one insists on downplaying their injuries to take care of the other one :D

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Oh where to begin???

This trope is so versatile, and the results really depend on the relationship dynamic between characters. The dozens upon dozens of sub-tropes? Are they mutually competent, student and mentor (i.e., parent and adopted child), siblings, lovers, best buddies, strangers, rivals, or (gasp) enemies???

Whatever the case may be, there's a lot of potential here.

Give me suppressed winces and forced smiles. Give me hoarse whispers of "promise you're okay?" and "are you sure?" Give me voluntary starvation and/or dehydration so their companion has the strength to heal. Give me an exhausted caretaker carrying their companion across unknown distances because "it's fine, I'm fine, just keep talking to me," even though each movement is agony. Bloodstained clothes turned sticky and stiff, hidden from view. Powering through the pain because oh God that's too much blood and their companion shouldn't sound like that. Broken bones going unset and grinding painfully with every movement. Give me stiff movements and piss-poor acting, but their companion is so unwell that they just can't see it.

Let's not leave out the lonely parts for our poor caretaker, though. Those moments when their companion is asleep and they try to treat their own injuries as silently as possible - but careful, careful, they need to ration their medical supplies because their companion needs it more than they do. Those moments when they say they're going to find some food or water, knowing there's none, and they just use it as an excuse to let the mask drop - just for a little while. The hours (or days) of silence, broken only by their companion's shuddering breaths. The melancholy of believing rescue is out of reach. The resignation of deciding to rescue themselves and their friend.

Then give me a companion that, once they're starting to improve, sees right through their caretaker's façade. That healthy glow now looks like a feverish flush on the face that's been hovering over them. The caretaker's movements are too sluggish to stop their companion's too-fast hands from grabbing that traitorous, bloodstained article of clothing. Now there's questions, too many of them, and their caretaker can only manage to give mumbled answers to two of them. Righteous anger. The guilt of rifling through their things, only to see that all of the medical supplies had been used on themselves. Hurried movements and oh-damn-that-still-hurts; but their caretaker just doesn't have the strength to stop them from pushing them to lie down and now the roles are reversed until help can arrive or they save themselves.

That, or the caretaker manages to keep up the strong and steady act until rescue finally comes. It's almost eerie, really, how their mind and body are in sync with one another until they're absolutely certain that their companion is in safe hands. Then the exhaustion and pain come crashing down on them all at once. Maybe they stumble. Maybe they collapse. Maybe several sets of hands catch them. Or maybe they go unnoticed until someone turns around and oh - oh that's why they stopped talking.

-Bonus-

Caretaker: You're gonna need a, b, and c. And maybe a crash cart.

Rescue Medic, confused: But... your friend's condition doesn't call for any of that stuff.

Caretaker, actively bleeding out with a completely straight face: It's not for them.

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This. This is Good Stuff™.

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Staring at the ten-part outline for the next section of Brothers' Blood and wondering if it would be OK to do like Tolkien and tell the whole climactic battle from the point of view of a character who passes out five minutes in.

I'm going to write it all out, obviously, but... it's a challenge. And the reason this chapter is taking so long.

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dathen

Still obsessed with Arthur Conan Doyle’s letter to Bram Stoker gushing about how wonderful a book Dracula is, but particularly how it makes such a good template for leaving fic comments, so I’m gonna to a BREAKDOWN:

  • Just say you loved reading it - “I am sure that you will not think it an impertinence if I write to tell you how very much I have enjoyed reading Dracula.”
  • Comment on a detail of the craft or structure that impressed you - “It is really wonderful how with so much exciting interest over so long a book there is never an anticlimax.“
  • Comment on how it emotionally affected you - “It holds you from the very start and grows more and more engrossing until it is quite painfully vivid.”
  • SHARE YOUR BLORBO FEELINGS - “The old Professor is most excellent and so are the two girls.”
  • Show appreciation for them as an author - “I congratulate you with all my heart for having written so fine a book.”

Next time you don’t know what to say on a fic you enjoyed, just use the ACD method~

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jinxedruby

Febuwhump Day Twenty-Two: "You weren't meant to be there"

Featuring Legend and Sky. Back to push my "Legend and Sky are buddies" agenda.

Heads up for major injury in this chapter.

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A heavy blow to his shield sent Legend stumbling back, splinters of pain lodging in his bone. He thrust his sword forward, only for the moblin to deflect it. The tip sank into the dirt before Legend could recover. He tried to yank it out but the moblin attacked again, swinging its club toward his side. He released his sword, twisting to block the blow. The club clipped the edge of his shield and cracked against his ribs, sending him flying. He hit the ground hard, pain bursting in his chest as he rolled. He gasped, the action only making the pain worse, trying to force himself to his feet. Stars danced in his vision and he only made it halfway, collapsing back to his hands and knees.

A shadow fell over him and he rolled, narrowly dodging a lizalfos’s blade. It screeched, lunging after him and striking again while he lay on his back. He blocked the blow with his shield, the impact jarring his already abused arm. The moblin appeared in his peripheral. With a grunt and creaking pain from his fractured ribs, he kicked the lizalfos sharply in its middle. It flinched back, giving him a brief moment to flip onto his stomach and scramble on hands and knees away from the moblin as it bore down on him. The club slammed into the ground just beside him, kicking up dirt. He struggled back to his feet as he moved and nearly ran headlong into a second moblin, one of the massive ones from Sky’s era. It roared and fell forward. He dove out of the way, the monster crashing onto its belly where he’d been moments before. He tried to regain his footing, breath hitching as it felt like his ribs ground against one another. He fell to one knee, staggered back to his feet, head spinning. Bracing his shield, he turned to face the monsters, backpedaling. He turned at the just the right angle for the first moblin’s club to nail him in the stomach.

The moblin threw him backwards, knocking the air from his lungs. His back slammed against the ground. Black spots crashed into his vision as his ribs groaned, sawdust taking up residence between bone and flesh. He gasped like a dying fish, staring up at the sky. Every breath brought more burning dust into his ribs but he had to breathe. He propped himself up on his elbows, tried to, at least. He barely got his shoulders off the ground before pain ripped through his abdomen, sending him back to the ground. Beasts moved in the edges of his vision and he weakly raised his shield. He dug through his pouch with his other hand. His fingers closed around a flat and round metal object. He threw a glance about. He could only see the monsters closing in. Last he saw before being separated, the other heroes were all at the bottom of the hill. Just as the first moblin reached him, looming over him with its club raised, he yanked out the Bombos medallion and fed his magic into it.

Explosions cracked around him, tearing up dirt and grass. The moblin roared as a blast launched it somewhere to his right. Several more monster screeches joined it, before the increasing explosions drowned them out. A lizalfos’s finger streaked overhead, smoke trailing behind it.

Then a human screamed and Legend’s blood went cold.

He struggled to sit up as the spell died out, gritting his teeth against the pain and forcing himself up. He glanced around, heart thudding painfully against his chest. Monster remains lay scattered around him, the smoke that curled upwards from them carrying the scent of burnt flesh. With as deep of a breath as he could manage, he pushed himself up to his knees, rising above the carnage just enough to see over it all. He scanned his surroundings, eyes darting from the bits of pink flesh to the detached limbs and digits. The grass sat blackened in a rough circle around him, flames still clinging to some of the blades. His eyes stretched wide at the mound of white and light green crumpled at the edge of the circle.

He staggered to his feet with a breathless curse that turned into a hiss, arm wrapped around his ribs. He stumbled through the monster remains, barely managing to keep from falling to the ground again as he tripped over the moblin’s club. His heart throbbed in his throat as he drew closer to the white lump, head spinning harder as he made out the blue design on the cloth.

“Shit,” he whispered. He repeated it, quickening his steps. He half-ran, half-tripped over to the body, repeating the curse like a mantra.

“Sky!” he cried in a rough voice. Less of a cry, more of a harsh whisper, ribs protesting the whole way. He circled around in front of the hero, lightheadedness clutching at him and threatening to bring him to the ground. The hero lay curled on his side, face slack. His cape twisted around his torso, speckled with red. Legend crouched beside him with a wince, grabbing the sailcloth with trembling fingers and disentangling it from around Sky. Blood soaked through Sky’s tunic, wreathing his middle and left side. Legend let out a sharp curse, gripping his hair as he took in what he’d done. He didn’t- he didn’t know, he never would’ve-

He forcibly shook off the mounting horror, reaching into his pouch with one hand while grabbing an apparently uninjured portion of Sky’s arm with the other. Sky twitched at the touch, face scrunching up in pain. He let out a soft hiss, eyelids fluttering open. His gaze landed somewhere near Legend’s chest, brow furrowing.

“V…Vet…?” he croaked then winced. He moved to press an arm to his middle but flinched away the moment it made contact, making a sound that was probably supposed to be a yelp.

“D-don’t touch it,” Legend hissed through his teeth, doing his best to ignore the pain lancing through his ribs as he dug through his pouch. “Din’s sake, Sky, what were- what were you doing there?”

“Y-you were… ‘n trouble,” Sky managed, wincing weakly. The blood crawled farther up his tunic.

Legend’s hands froze, eyes widening. Sky was coming to help him. Of course he was, and then Legend- Legend- He clenched his jaw, choking back the horror once more as he resumed his search for a potion. Dammit, why didn’t he have any kind of organization, Warriors was right, he had way too much shit-

Sky let out a quiet sigh and went still. Legend’s head jerked up to stare at him.

“Hey,” he croaked, reaching out and grabbing Sky’s arm again. Droplets of Sky’s blood sank into the grass beneath him. Legend squeezed his arm harder, afraid to shake him and jostle the wounds. “Hey, no, you can’t- y-you can’t do this. Sky. Sky.” The chosen hero didn’t move. The horror roared up Legend’s throat before he could stop it, crashing into him and knocking all the air from his lungs. Sky was coming to help and Legend blew him up, he blew him up. He squeezed Sky’s arm so hard his knuckles went white, frantically searching through his bag with his other hand. No, find something to heal him, worry about waking him up later. If he’s even still- No, no, he was breathing. He had to be. Legend dug both hands into his pouch and began pulling out his items, tossing them haphazardly onto the grass. He had to have something. He had to, he was the collector, he had everything, he had to, it was in there somewhere, he just had to fucking find it-

His hand closed around a bottle and he yanked it out only to chuck it to the ground when only a green liquid sloshed around inside. Useless. Power bracelets. Useless. Boomerang. Useless. Old dungeon map. Why is that even in here, useless. He glanced back at Sky. His breath caught in his throat as he saw just how much of Sky’s tunic had been stained a dark reddish-brown by his blood, the chosen hero’s face white as a sheet. What was the point of having all these items, all this experience when he couldn’t even find one potion to heal his friend, what was the point?

The next bottle he pulled out contained red liquid. He lurched forward, the dust between his ribs and flesh igniting at the movement. A whine built in his throat and he bit his lip, reaching for Sky with one hand, clutching the red potion in the other. Sky didn’t respond to the touch on his arm, horribly still under Legend’s hand. Legend shook him before he could change his mind. Sky’s expression twisted and he groaned, hand moving sluggishly to the injuries hidden under his tunic.

“Sky,” Legend said through the pain, voice tight. “Sky, I’ve got a potion.”

Sky’s eyes opened just a crack, gaze drifting about aimlessly. Legend held the bottle in front of his eyes. Sky’s eyes began to drift closed again and Legend swore. He gently pushed Sky onto his back, gut twisting as the chosen hero whimpered. He shifted closer to Sky and carefully threaded an arm under Sky’s shoulders, lifting him so his head propped up against Legend’s shoulder. He ripped the cork out of the bottle with his teeth and held the glass rim to Sky’s lips. Sky weakly turned his head away from it, eyes still closed.

“Gonna… throw up,” he managed, arms pressed over his stomach.

“Sky, drink the fucking potion!” Legend yelled, despite how it made his ribs burn.

Sky’s eyelids fluttered again, gaze clearing just slightly. His eyes traveled to Legend, noticed the potion that Legend practically shoved against his mouth. He pushed his lips against the rim just slightly and Legend tipped the bottle toward him. Sky screwed his eyes shut as the potion poured into his mouth, throat moving as he swallowed it down. He had to stop once or twice, breathing shallowly through his mouth, face pale. Eventually, he drained the last drop and slumped back against Legend’s arm with a sigh. Legend pitched forward against the sudden weight, throwing out a leg to catch himself. He yelped through his teeth, screwing his eyes shut as sparks of pain shot through his chest.

“Y’re hurt,” Sky slurred, shifting in Legend’s arms.

“Did it work?” Legend gritted out instead of shut up and worry about yourself for once. Sky gingerly prodded at his middle and side, sighing and not flinching from the touch.

“Yeah,” he breathed. He braced his hands on the ground behind him and tried to push himself up but failed, arms trembling violently. When he fell back against Legend’s arm that time, the veteran was ready. “Tired.”

“Yeah, that’s what happens when-“ Legend’s words stuttered to a stop. He meant to say ‘that’s what happens when you lose that much blood’ but the horror clawed its way up his throat once again. “S-Sky, I-“ He choked when Sky looked up at him, blinking slowly. “I didn’t- I didn’t know you- you were there, I…”

Sky watched him for a moment, eyelids drooping. He reached up and patted Legend’s hand where it clutched his shoulder. “S’okay.” Then his eyes fell shut and he went limp.

Legend swore, shifting as Sky’s full weight sagged against him. With a pained hiss, he stretched his leg out in front of him to rest his arm on. Every breath felt like tiny knives scraping against the inside of his ribs. He glanced around them, partially to see if any of the others were nearby, partially to make sure no other monsters were coming. He relaxed slightly when he saw no monsters, turning to look back down at Sky’s sleeping face. The slightest hint of pink grew in his cheeks and lips, just enough to tell Legend that he had only passed out and his wounds weren’t bleeding anymore. Legend half-heartedly attempted to stand, only shifting slightly before immediately giving up, pain rocketing inside his chest. He pursed his lips, holding Sky a little tighter. They certainly weren’t going anywhere anytime soon. He could only hope that the others found them before more monsters did.

Oh, Legend and Sky being buddies! :D

But poor Sky, poor Legend, that's a horrible thing to happen. But I love the interaction and Legend digging through his bag to get the potion in time. The bit with the dungeon map made me giggle a bit even though it's such a tense situation.

And then when Sky is healed and collapses on Legend's arm, that's really satisfying :)

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la-sera

@alicewritingstories Will you believe me?

I once read one of your fics, but I forgot to bookmark the fic, and I accidentally deleted all the tabs on my cell phone. However, I drew a sketch of 1 scene from your fic that I remembered, but because I hadn't found the fic, over time, I forgot about the fic. I don't remember the title or writer too.

Until yesterday, I saw your fic list, and I felt like it was the fic I had been looking for! I immediately read it and looked for my old sketch, and...

Do you know which scene this is from the fic Brother's Blood? (old sketch)

No?

Ok, here is after I read your fic again. XD

Your fic makes me tense and want to keep reading! I love it! Thank you for sharing your fic!

Fanart of the fic Brother's Blood, chapter 7. Please read this fic, Guys!

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articuno13

here you go. The fic that has me jealous in all the good ways.

(is it jealous? ehh whatev its making me feel things and look at Captured with the "this is junk" lens all us authors have when we look at our own stuff when depression is kicking our asses) .

I am going to keep writing and keep practicing and eventually my work is gonna be as good as this bc damn.

(in some corner Wars is shivering in fear)

Is, uh... is Captured posted anywhere? Because if it's Warriors whump, which it sounds from your post like it is, it might be relevant to my interests...

(And thank you very much for your kind words - I'm sorry if my writing exacerbates any bad feelings; that's a hard place to be, so sending you a big thumbs up and all the encouragement I can and thanks again for saying you like my work; I see a lot of flaws when I look at it and it feels amazing to hear people like it anyway yes, thanks, bye *runs away *)

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la-sera

@alicewritingstories Will you believe me?

I once read one of your fics, but I forgot to bookmark the fic, and I accidentally deleted all the tabs on my cell phone. However, I drew a sketch of 1 scene from your fic that I remembered, but because I hadn't found the fic, over time, I forgot about the fic. I don't remember the title or writer too.

Until yesterday, I saw your fic list, and I felt like it was the fic I had been looking for! I immediately read it and looked for my old sketch, and...

Do you know which scene this is from the fic Brother's Blood? (old sketch)

No?

Ok, here is after I read your fic again. XD

Your fic makes me tense and want to keep reading! I love it! Thank you for sharing your fic!

Fanart of the fic Brother's Blood, chapter 7. Please read this fic, Guys!

*hysterical screaming and hand-clapping * Oh wow oh wow oh wow this is so cool and thank you thank you thank you!

Poor Wild and everyone just realizing the yiga is coming but it's too late and *more screaming *

Thank you again so much, I'm so excited and I'm so happy you're enjoying it and glad you found it again and yay!

Do you mind if I link to this?

Thank you!

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la-sera

Sketches of Hyrule healing his brothers.

Maybe will become a short comic.

So pretty...

Would you mind if I wrote something inspired by any of these? I don't want to tread on your comic because I'd love to see it

Thank you ^^

Of course I don't mind, if my sketch can make you have an idea, that's my pleasure!

If you've finished writing it, can you tell me the link? I would love to read your fic!

Oh, I haven't done it yet because I wanted to wait and make sure it was OK, but I'll let you know as soon as it's done!

Thank you! 🤩

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mischefous

If you're still taking requests, I'd like to suggest Sky and Warriors. Maybe in the aftermath of a battle or accidentally falling off of something tall. Whatever you think fits.

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Sooo I went with the 'Aftermath of a battle' route hehe. Poor Sky! Big Brother Wars be taking good care of him though. i just hope the arrow isn't poisoned or anything :0

Thank you @gryphonlover! you have a great day💙

CW! Arrow injury, Blood, bruises

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❤ I especially like their expressions. Wars looks so caring and concerned and it's obvious from their balance how much Sky is leaning on him ❤❤

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