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I might not be one of those who have Sans as one of their favorite characters, but frankly i truly feel like there is something unique in the way Toby Fox wrote Sans' character compared to the others.

Something about the way Sans was written is incredibly difficult to replicate for a fan.

What i mean is, for instance, let us say for the sake of example that i decide to sit down and try to imagine or even write down a short scene involving Sans. (Like you might see in a fancomic.)

Despite having done so much research about the character, the way he works, talks, acts, etc... It will take me far longer to do this for him than with any of the other characters. Like, three times as long !

And even then after all that, it usually doesn't quite feel quite right...

It speaks like Sans, it acts like Sans, its character is accurate to Sans', but it is like it misses something. A sort of more profound "Sans vibe" that is incredibly difficult to convey even if you write the character "accurately".

This is something that happens on a much wider scale, too. I've talked to several people who have reported feeling the exact same way whenever they looked at comics or other fan content featuring Sans. Especially the pacifist/neutral routes Sans.

People may replicate Sans' character with varying canon accuracy, but it nearly always feels like it is lacking a part of Sans' charm when you compare those ones to the very few official Sans content that pops up once in a couple years from Toby's hand.

Toby Fox really seems to be the only person able to write Sans "that way" in a very consistent manner.

Sans is the only character in the game that gives me this feeling...

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Here's some helpful tips to write Sans:

  • Sans doesn't react to ANY puns except smiling when Papyrus gets irritated at a pun Toriel made
  • Sans doesn't have nightmares, he sleeps 7 hours a night
  • The Pie that Sans attempted to make was a Butterscotch Pie, not a Quiche
  • Sans does not directly experience resets, he's only aware of them because a machine told him there were resets. He thinks you are the cause of Flowey's resets.
  • Sans is exceptional levels of lazy, he is too lazy to care about most things.
  • Sans doesn't read a bedtime story to Papyrus
  • Sans is very social and likes to hang out in large groups of people
  • Sans purposely encourages the idea that Papyrus is childish/simple
  • Sans is a liar about everything

Obviously after that list I shall make one about Papyrus:

  • Papyrus tells more puns than Sans
  • Papyrus gets angry at Sans for slacking off, not only the pun he tells, the pun is part of his slacking off
  • Papyrus cares about everyone he knows/meets, and remembers specific details about them
  • Papyrus knows what death is, and wants to meet death
  • Papyrus and Undyne know what a Quiche is, either one of them could have abandoned it.
  • Papyrus also cooks lasagna, and knows every other type of pasta, not just spaghetti
  • The annoying dog eats his cooking
  • Flowey mentions his favourite food is the Porridge with eggs in it, but he doesn't mention Papyrus eating it
  • Papyrus can use Gaster Blasters
  • Papyrus has nightmares
  • Papyrus doesn't know how to sleep or refuses to? He is too busy to sleep after all (HE'S TOO BUSY TO JOIN DELTARUNE TOO AAAAAA)
  • Papyrus implies knowing how events/ingame mechanics work, and also implies the ability to use a save file. "IS SANS PRANKING YOU ACROSS TIME AND SPACE? I HATE IT WHEN HE DOES THAT!" - Sans can only prank you because you can load and save over and over to get the key to his room. How does Papyrus know this?
  • Papyrus is not social at all, he spends a majority of time inside his house
  • Papyrus purposely encourages you being suspicious of Sans
  • Papyrus is a liar about everything

Also a fun fact!

  • Undyne avoids talking directly to Sans, and when he speaks, she stops
  • Fighting is part of Monster Culture, the monsters have no intent to hurt/kill you. They fight/attack every other monster as well

VERY IMPORTANT LIST

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Hello! How are you?

Excuse me but, could I please have your permission to clean crushedberry

using bleach, scrub sponge and antiseptic /antibacterial products?

He needs a bath!

(I am so sorry I couldn't help myself🤣)

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Don’t be sorry!

He is rather filthy… but if you cleaned him, he’d dissolve into nothing. If you look closely… he’s covered in breaks and cracks. That filth is gluing the boy together!

He DOES bathe, though. Sulfur baths every day!

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maxladcomics

GraveMistake

In GraveMistake, the monsters are all influenced by a curse that has turned them into mostly-mindless monsters, all heavily based on certain events that are still a secret.

Visiting monsters, and especially humans, can be heavily influenced by this world’s curse. For monsters it happens slowly after a week of staying there, but for humans, it’s instant.

Monsters can avoid the curse by staying for a few days and leaving, but it is unpredictable. The risk of turning can be different for each monster, depending on their health, mental state and who they run into in this world.

The curse doesn’t change humans physically. Instead, it makes them see and hear things that aren’t there. If they’re able to leave the underground/world, it doesn’t follow them.

If something feels strangely familiar, that is entirely intentional.

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maxladcomics

I finished this uhhh, last week and finally got around to posting it pff

Anyway feel free to use it, if you get stuck you can ask or message me, or search up tutorials. I plan on remaking him once I get better (and get more free time) but this was a lot of fun and really good practice. 

He’s technically my second model. I’ve drawn 3 and rigged 2, and I plan on making more when I have the time (Underfell Papyrus when???)

WOWIE THIS IS AMAZING!!! 😍

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Undercurrent Toriel, the outsider.

Basics:

The only monster on the outside of the barrier, she’s managed to get along with enough people to trade at a few ports closest to the sealed island and frequently goes back and forth to a few ports. She’s capable of sailing through any type of weather by herself, which is strange, but no one really questions it.

She is kind to a fault and will offer help to anyone that she’s able to, often offering free passage to the next port. No one has seemed to notice that a few have never returned.

She sent a few humans into a dingy towards the island during storms, while she has no idea of their fate, she will keep sending them in until she gets what she wants.. whatever that is.

Cheeeks 🤩

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WELCOME to the Twenty-First page of the main story. This part of the story is called “Rivertale: The Brothers River” Creative right??

First step into the Multiverse…

The brothers load into….

RIVERFELL

If you're injured in an alternate universe of your own... does anyone hear you scream? First           |            Previous          |            Previous Prologue          |            Next          |

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maxladcomics

First of all it’s awesome to see your still making such great Undertale comics!

I did want to ask how long it usually takes for you to complete a page?

I’ve done a couple comics before, but I find they take forever. It’s amazing you have the patience for it.

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HECK YEAH, THANKS!

Well! If I have a sketch and script already up, depending on the detail and shading, probably 3-5 hours? Obviously it depends on how long the pages are, since my style of them can go from 8-16 panels EASY.

From reactions during streams, apparently I am very fast at drawing, so the time it takes might be unusual lol.

I never considered patience to be part of the process tbh, it's normally motivation issues, especially when I'm lacking free time.

But I do get impatient when I can't work out a page that seemed so easy before I started, then I start yelling at whoever will listen to see if they can help me, or see what I've done wrong.

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@maxladcomics you are very unusual in your turnaround rates from scripting to the final result.

But— patience and motivation are huge hindrances for me. I’m still going— but now I’m working on another addition to the River-verses… so there’s another reason for delays in updates. Doing too much.

Again. @maxladcomics is unusual in this that he can have over 5 different comics going- and still lovingly hurt us at a constant basis. 🤣

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