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Chapter 1: New Start (May - Part I) You felt your weakened defenses being disarmed piece-by-piece, courtesy of a kind face and well-kept hair and eyes that smiled when they saw you. This man made it impossible to dislike him, which somehow made the situation all the more frustrating.
  • Maruki/Reader multichapter
  • Gender-neutral, second-person POV, no use of Y/N
  • Canon-compliant character study / wish fulfillment
  • Fluff / angst / relationship development / one-sided pining (from Reader)

For @takutomarukiweek. Daily updates planned for the event.

Basically, we fill in the blanks of the canon timeline with brainrot.

A lot of love's going into this one, hope you guys enjoy.

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Been uber busy prototyping and thumbnailing my new Ikutsuki / Marushuji comic zine. As in, the first part is Ikutsuki meta, and the next elaborates on my au of him with Maruki lol. Excited to make this really good, the yaoi of it all

i might elaborate later but fanfic replies literally develop writer’s metacognition and make them better writers

so, Metacognition is the practice of thinking about thinking or identifying one’s cognitive process . in essence, metacognition is understanding how you prepare for academic challenges, exams, or tasks, and then being able to reflect on whether you did well, you prepared adequately, and what was most effective. in a writing setting, this type of self-awareness helps you transfer skills in writing, say, fanfiction into writing academically, competitively and professionally. 

here’s an article from brown university on the subject i’ll discuss further. there are 3 parts of practicing metacognition identified in this article: planning, monitoring, and evaluation. how might this look like for a fanfic writer? 

planning: asking oneself ‘what is my goal?’ ‘what strategies should i use to meet that goal?’ ‘how much time/length do i need to meet my goal?’. so maybe my goal is to write a meet cute where two characters kiss. i’ll need to use a perspective, an upbeat tone, and forward characterization to do this. it’ll probably take 5000 words and two days to write. 

monitoring: asking oneself: is my story making sense? am i reaching my goal, or do i need to summarize more succinctly to keep it to 5k? maybe you started with a lot of exposition and now you’re 6k in and the characters haven’t met yet. what went wrong/changed? is it ok that it changed or did you not realize it got away from you? what now? 

evaluation: asking oneself: did i reach my goal? was it effective? what would i change next time? 

this is where comments come in

it is incredibly difficult to evaluate yourself. comments like “i love this!” actually do begin to touch on the evaluation step of metacognition. it means, in general, the writer is on the right track. comments like “i loved the dialogue between x and y” or “the emotions of this section really hit me” begin to answer the questions of was it effective, did i reach my goal and conversely answer what would i change next time (by adding more of whatever was specified as working well). HYPER SPECIFIC comments, like analyzing the story between the lines or pasting in a line that you really liked and explaining why, is like jet fuel for the metacognition process and i’m not exaggerating. specifically pointing out what was effective and why is incredibly useful 

i can straight up credit my writing style to all of my friends and readers who have given incredibly detailed comments. when i found a community who gave feedback like that, my writing improved a thousand times faster than before. so! i guess what i’m saying is give feedback! it goes so much further than you realize!

This is exactly the post I was thinking about when I wrote that recent post about how fanfic authors develop as authors by adapting to what they perceive as successful with their audience -- based on positive feedback.

Feedback absolutely does not need to be "critical" to help an author improve, and anyone who insists that fanfic authors need negative feedback or they'll never grow is. Well. To start with, incorrect.

I have some thoughts about comments and feedback and I will put them behind this cut tag.

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We started a game about a kid falling in a hole and within an hour he was a 38 year old man with a wife, kids, a mortgage, and genuinely more lore than most fully fleshed characters in actual Undertale. Oh also we're playing Undertale. Live with @fivetail, @funnywes, and others! https://www.twitch.tv/veggiebltail

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Reading Fic Pre-Posting: No typos whatsoever. Reads well. Flows beautifully. I have definitely found all possible spelling and grammar errors.
Reading Fic After Posting: A typo every three lines. Ten grammatical errors. Switches tense twice. POV changes for no discernible reason. Uses the word "look" five times in one sentence.
Chapter 7 + 8: Summer Break You make a near-lifelong commitment, and find productive ways to spend the rest of summer break.
  • Maruki/Reader multichapter
  • Gender-neutral Reader; Second-person POV; Canon-compliant character study
  • Fluff / angst / relationship development / one-sided pining (from Reader)
  • Originally for @takutomarukiweek 2023, before the brainrot took over.

Featuring new artwork by watermelonie4.

I feel bad that some of yall assume Reddit is just for republican neckbeards. it is currently fucking plastered in leftist posts, making fun of trump and musk, calling out trump for basically admitting to election fraud and musk for the fucking salute, people literally openly saying they wish these assholes would die. Some subreddits with broad other purposes have been largely converted into leftist communities. Believing tumblr is the only existing bastion of leftists or whatever WILL make you bitter and miserable lol

What people think Reddit is: you sir have won the internets with your epic atheist logic!

What Reddit actually is:

I opened the fucking silly jojos bizarre adventure meme page and the first thing i saw was a meme straight up calling out musk as a fascist

many subreddits, including seriously huge and popular ones such as r/NFL, r/christianty, and r/destiny2 are also now banning links from twitter due to musk’s salute. entire teams of mods are coming together to put out the message that they don’t support nazi’s and that anyone who does can go fuck themselves. there is also talks of banning anything from meta like facebook and instagram since zuckerburg seems to have bent the knee and is going full mask off with. it’s honestly really refreshing to see

if you make an OC that you are genuinely insane over, like you are obsessed with this freak and can't stop thinking about them, then it will rub off on other people. the virus spreads

but (and this is the most important part) you HAVE to be insane about them. you can't just make an OC and be normal about them, they have to consume your thoughts

everyone reblogging this and saying in the tags that they don't talk about their OCs online much: just do it. have fun. you will make friends

of course I need to hyperfixate on the fictional character for emotional support do you expect me to just rawdog the horrors

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Ever read a fic and as a result plan to buy shit? That's happened to me with From Eden by @fivetail. It paints Maruki so captivatingly and I need to weep every once in a while for it. read if you want an explanation to the poster.

This cat works to motivate me but not in its intended way. I see it, think about Maruki, and my day is better. I bought it partially as a joke, but it's real to me now. I love it

WHAT THE FUCK

"depiction is not automatically glorification" can and should coexist with "some depiction is glorification and you need to be able to tell the difference"

Please add to that list "apparent glorification in the first 15% of the thing does not constitute real glorification if the remaining 85% is dedicated to suffering the consequences, deconstructing the damage and changing ways" because some people around here don't understand how the three act structure works.

Y'know yeah i will absolutely add this especially since people keep saying fight club is an example of glorification. Genuinely thanks for having one of the few good additions to this post

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