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Femme Fatale

@hourghlass / hourghlass.tumblr.com

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miss you too!!! haven’t seen you that much lately that’s why i’m checking in 😂 at least now i know you’re good 😂💕

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Ive been working SO much bro oof!! Yes I am, I’m glad you’re okay as well!!💓 also happy super late bday bby I hope it was good

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i’m doing good except for the few times retrogrades kicked my ass 😂 but i got it under control now, i hope 😂🤞

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Haha oh no!!!! I’m glad:) imy

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i just want you to know that if you streamed 6ix9ine's song and contributed to him getting number one... fuck you. this man sexually abused a 13 year old girl and somehow no one gives a fuck. i know everyone is joking about him being a snitch and it became a meme but like... he is genuinely an awful human being who SEXUALLY ABUSED MINORS. AND NO ONE CARES. he got his first number one this week. people are streaming his music and supporting him and it's absolutely beyond me. you cannot, and i can't stress this enough, seperate the artist from the music. hold people accountable for the shit they do. he should be in prison not popping champagne on ig celebrating a number one single. also fuck nicki minaj for supporting him. idgaf. she knows. EVERYONE knows. and yet she still decides to collab with him? for what?? clout? give me a fucking break. if you KNOW about everything he's done and you still support him / affiliate yourself with him, you're not any better. you're supporting a pedophile. try talking yourself out of that one.

if y’all support him or listen to his music get the fuck off my blog, i’ll hold the door open.

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You know, Zuko and Aang were close friends. Their relationship started off a little rocky, but they grew to become lifelong friends. Best friends.

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ironinkpen

writers:

  • break up your paragraphs. big paragraphs are scary, your readers will get scared
  • fuuuuck epithets. “the other man got up” “the taller woman sat down” “the blonde walked away” nahhh. call them by their names or rework the sentence. you can do so much better than this (exception: if the reader doesn’t know the character(s) you’re referring to yet, it’s a-okay to refer to them by an identifying trait)
  • blunette is not a thing
  • new speaker, new paragraph. please.
  • “said” is such a great word. use it. make sweet love to it. but don’t kill it
  • use “said” more than you use synonyms for it. that way the use of synonyms gets more exciting. getting a sudden description of how a character is saying something (screaming, mumbling, sighing) is more interesting that way.
  • if your summary says “I suck at summaries” or “story better than summary” you’re turning off the reader, my dude. your summary is supposed to be your hook. you gotta own it, just like you’re gonna own the story they’re about to read
  • follow long sentences w short ones and short ones w long ones. same goes for paragraphs
  • your writing is always better than you think it is. you just think it’s bad because the story’s always gonna be predicable to the one who’s writing it
  • i love u guys keep on trucking
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