Reblogged usearki
Editing? Oh you mean fic patching.
- Protagonist now has more complex motivations.
- Protagonist now remembers key facts about important people. He no longer develops convenient amnesia between cutscenes.
- Protagonist now has a cooldown on certain adverbs. Adverbs have been buffed by 30% to compensate.
- Developer note: Adverbs are important to writing but they are sometimes overused. This change keeps adverbs relevant while encouraging the use of adjectives and verbs.
- The horse now has a name.
- Deuteragonist snark power has been increased to 150, up from 75.
- Characters now no longer reference the previous version’s climate and have been updated to react appropriately to the currently set season.
- Solved a glitch where supernumerary limbs would sometimes emerge during complex physical interactions.
- Should no longer display “[insertnamehere]” during conversations and narration. All of such occurrances have been replaced with the appropriate tags.
- Conversation continuity has been improved. Characters will no longer inappropriately respond with lines from previous iterations of the narrative.
- All references to “Event A” have been purged to reflect changes in narrative structure.
- Now with more thematically-consistent swearing.
- Back-to-back repeated words that resulted from sentence rearranging or start/stop editing have been cleared.
- Paragraphs which contained two or more instances of the same adjective have had their adjectives updated to accurately reflect a player’s vocabulary inventory.
- Minor time traveling issues have been resolved, all characters should now exist in the same tense.
- Punctuation has been improved. Commas have been reduced by half.
- Characters sighing has been reduced by 30%.
- Characters looking at things or people during conversations has been reduced by 40%. To make up for this, characters thinking about the conversation has been boosted and descriptive narrative has been added.
- Title has been applied.
