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@alittlewhump

Listen, I'm shy but I have Interests 👀 In my thirties, she/they, Canada. Mind the tags; I will very occasionally post NSFW content. Likes and follows from gearbee. Unlikely to participate in tag games but I do appreciate the thought.
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Master masterlist

Organization is so important.

Peter and Joy: An unfortunate soul and his hard-working nurse. Slightly dodgy medical-flavoured whump.

(they'll get their own post when I write another installment. 3 is the magic number.)

Sink or Swim: Collaboratively written with @distinctlywhumpthing . Box boy adjacent, a whumper tries to break into the field of pet whump with a bold new direction.

Unbidden: A long story, less whump heavy, fantasy setting (the world of Sanctuary - loosely a Diablo 2 fanfic). Individual chapter warnings, as far as big warnings go it contains torture and suicidal ideation/intent, and not a great deal of comfort until the epilogue.

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Tied Up Magic Whump Trope

So we love tied up whump, right?

Imagine this: you have a mage, or a character who can use magic. Tie them up. But not with regular old fashioned rope.

Tie them up with rope that prevents their magic!

So the magical character couldn't use their magic to get themselves free. If they try, they would have to deal with some sort of pain. Does their head throb terribly? Do the ropes have some sort of prevention mechanism (ie, shocking them) to hurt the whumpee when they try to use their magic?

Bonus: when the Whumpee is freed from the ropes, the surge of magic that was held down for so long from their bonds was so overwhelming, they either pass out or they hold their head and scream and cry in extreme pain. Bonus BONUS if their Caretaker holds them close as the magical pain hits the Whumpee, comforting them!

  • Magic restraints usually make the whumpee feel exhausted or barren because their mana give them energy and now they are without it
  • They may feel dizzy or sick and vomit
  • They will most likely claw at the restraint trying to get just a slight feel of mana back in their body but only end up injuring themselves
  • Bonus if Whumper uses their magic while their restrained, so they can feel the mana following through them but can’t access it

BONUS - if Whumper feeds on their magic in their already weakened state. If you like the bloodbath kinda thing but with mana.

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Whump idea of the day:

Magical restraints - that is, shackles locked not with a key, but with magic. Forged from the strongest of materials, charmed to be unbreakable by brute force. A spell is the only way to remove them.

A captive being rescued by someone unable to use magic. They can be carried to safety, but their shackles remain locked. They must remain in chains even after rescue, until someone with magic can free them. Still limited in motion, still dependent, still not quite free.

Or worse, the rescue failing, because the chains are connected to something - the wall, the floor, a weight. The rescuers swearing they'll come back, that they'll find someone with magic who can help. Trying to comfort the captive as best they can, but ultimately forced to leave them alone - or else risk their own capture.

Or maybe, the captor is the only one who can use the spell to unlock the restraints. The captive - or their rescuers - having no choice but to bargain for their freedom.

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"Disembowel" is actually a hilarious term. Guts undone, bowels cancelled. Got your entrail privileges revoked. You can either act a clown or you can have your guts intact, but you can't have both and I can't unclown you.

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jaceconfuzed

even better! There are 2 prefixes in that word “dis-“ and “em-“

Dis- being to negate, reverse, or otherwise Opposite the Thing

And

Em- being to put into, to cause to become

(Like embitter is to put bitterness into a thing)

So Disembowel is to negate putting the bowels inward

Which may ABSOLUTELY happen by both natural and unnatural causes

The english language has a specific word for turning someone's innards into outnards.

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silvercap

Thinking about the phrase 'slipped a blade between his ribs.' Innocuous little phrase for a knife to the lung... usually gets associated with assassins and stuff, but it just conjures up an image of closeness. Intimacy? Whatever it is, I've been thinking about it all day 👀

Slipped. Slid. Either way, there's something about it that's always gotten to me, too. Despite being very different from my usual tastes for aftermath/caretaking focused stuff. (Older me has realized that this sort of thing is beyond what your typical cottage-in-the-woods herbalist is equipped to handle. Younger me did not care enough about medical accuracy to be bothered.)

I'd rather ramble in the tags, but I think this is too long, so here's a cut for folks who'd rather scroll on by

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Deep raspy breathing where the lungs aren't fully expanding. Breathing that's interrupted by sickening, hacking coughs that Whumpee can't fight off. Passing out because they can't breathe properly.

Whumpees who've been strangled and choked, Whumpees with breathing conditions shoved in dusty, dirty spaces. Whumpees who're so desperate to breathe they rip and claw at their own throat...

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I think hand trauma is so good in whump tho. Like, burning the palms of the hands, cutting them, going deep enough to hit bone or crush them under a boot. Caning hands, causing permanent nerve damage, removing nails, cutting a tendon or maybe just tying them behind whumpee’s back, forcing them to try to complete tasks without their dexterity, leaving them tied so long that they feel like they’ll never be able to use them again. Being forced to work with bandaged, bruised fingers, dislocating a thumb whenever whumpee isn’t fast or smart enough.

Hand trauma ♥️ you feel?

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One character chafing feeling back into another character's newly unbound hands- cupping bruised and abraded wrists in a gentle hold, working life into stiff, numb fingers, pressing cold fingertips between their own warm palms, soothing the pins-and-needles flood of sensation, returning a clumsy grasp of reassurance.

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Love it when characters have been through some torment or captivity or illness or Big Bad Event and come away from it just...gaunt. Thin and hollowed out, circles under their eyes that refuse to fade no matter how much they rest. So pale and skinny they look like a breeze could blow them over. Thin hair, shaky limbs. Eyes squinting outside, unused to bright light. You know, all that.

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What is the truth to those scenes where people will be fighting and not realize they’ve been stabbed, then look down at see the knife (or other sharp object) and then collapse? Can that happen? Is adrenaline that powerful? If someone stabs a knife into someone’s stomach/intestine area, surely they’d feel SOMETHING at the impact, right?

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It's extremely possible for a character to be stabbed and not notice immediately, especially if their adrenaline is already pumping from fighting. Lots of people report just feeling like they were punched in the moment. Of course, the second that adrenaline wears off it's big ouchie time.

NOTE: obviously these are not scientific journals, so take everything with a hearty grain of salt.

There's a lot of answers in here saying similar things, along with the aftermath of realizing they're been stabbed.

There are also some more extreme scenarios along the same lines:

This article is my personal favorite, there's a variety of different people's pain experiences with being stabbed.

Hope this helps!

-Mod J

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whumpwillow

a whumpee with a duty forced upon them. a whumpee with a duty they feel they have to do, even if it hurts. even if their body is torn up and scarred. they think that this is their only purpose, the only thing left, the only reason for their existence. they’re self-loathing and they’re guilty and they’re suffering, but they need to keep doing this so they can’t die yet

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