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Linguist, engineer, scientist, a pretty fair mechanic... an Explorer. Carter IRL. Tends to attach oneself to characters bound to be killed by season 2. Has too many OTPs to count. Sometimes writes and fiddles with photoshop. Returned to fandom(s) after trying to pretend to be "Normal" for more than a decade... this is better - trust me :)
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isagrimorie

The more I dig into the Voyager rewatch, and the more I see Janeway is giving in more and more to the Valkyrie she's always inside. The more intriguing Janeway is. I already think she's great but digging deeper into Janeway is amazing.

I keep thinking of how Janeway holds on to the Starfleet regulations and it makes me think of that Doctor Who quote and how she fits the description to a tee:

"Good men don't need rules. Today is not the day to find out why I have so many."

I feel this is Janeway -- she has rules for a reason, she's not evil but she also knows she can go very, very far.

Janeway has been through a brutal border skirmish in the conflict with the Cardassians. She downplays it but, how Kate Mulgrew, it feels like there was a lot more there.

She ranked up from Lieutenant, not because of being a Science Officer but because she's a decorated vet in a bloody siege, where they won.

As we've seen from Sige of AR-558 and the episode in Strange New Worlds ground combat is a whole different beast from ship-to-ship battle.

(Tom looks like a zombie in the last one btw)

Also, IMO, she's one of the more inventive tacticians in Starfleet-- the way she used the torpedoes in Year of Hell as a mine was amazing!

That's a great naval tactic shit. Hot girl navy.

But also, Janeway fits so much the Doctor Who, Good Man Goes to War rhyme:

Demons run when a good man goes to war. Night will fall and drown the sun, when a good man goes to war. Friendship dies and true love lies, night will fall and the dark will rise, when a good man goes to war.

It's also true of Janeway that when the three people that form the basis of Janeway's mental health died and/or became very sick, Admiral Endgame Janeway happened. And then she destroyed the Borg.

Janeway needs rules for a reason.

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justreckin

Just briefly harping on a thing that drives me nuts but:

In Q & A the very first time we meet Una her rank is listed as Lt. Commander and her arm bands look like this:

So you wanna explain to me why years later when her arm bands look like this:

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We're still calling her Lt. Commander???????

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carter-sg-1

Yes! Exactly!!! This had been driving me nuts!!!!

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So apparently making PikeUna lists is kind of my thing now...

Missing PikeUna or Pike & Una scenes I really wanted to see in SNW:

(Some of which I think have been really well covered in fanfics already)

  • Talking about La'an! Pike and Una are close, but she'd never mentioned La'an before she boarded the Enterprise, there's no way Pike doesn't beg Una for all of the gossip, or at least tips on how to approach and befriend this new Security Officer.
  • Honest conversation about Pike leaving Enterprise & Una following Discovery. After having spent much of that career together, that potentially could have been hurtful, especially as Chris didn't want to ever come back, and contemplated not doing so even when hearing she was missing. And even if it didn't hurt her, I think they need to talk about Pike's head space now he's back (even leaving the whole Boreth and the future thing aside). Make this either take place in sickbay (Una's leg was broken!) or after she's released, but I think having it in sickbay and MBenga being vaguely around, getting to see the two of them and their friendship for the first time would be good.
  • Talking about Una's revelation that she's Illyrian - We got a cute scene where Pike vehemently rejects her resignation and that heartbreaking moment at the end when Una questions whether Pike would have acted differently if she hadn't saved the ship. YET they don't talk about it!!!!!! That's a big deal, a massive secret that she's hid from him from decades. Chris must have so many questions, his head must he swirling. Una is anxious Chris only likes her still because she saved people. There are some big feelings that need sorting out, I can see them both being anxious about bringing it up, but there should have been a scene where they finally talk about it at some point in season 1. Maybe whilst doing the washing up one night it just comes flooding out.
  • Pike going to see Una after she almost died and had to be stitched up - A mix of fear that she almost died & anger that she could be so stupid & not seek medical attention earlier. I'd have liked to have this scene either take place in sickbay, or Una coming to the Captain's quarters (without approval to leave sickbay) still hurt but knowing that Pike needs somebody given that members of their crew died. A scene, to show their vulnerability with one another and that they have each other's backs.
  • Una and Pike trading stories after Spock Amok - Preferably a late night drinking scene, or she swings by for a late night snack in his kitchen. They're both in pajamas eating Brie and drinking wine, leaning against the counter. Pike bumping her arm that got shot with the phaser and Una wincing. She ends up revealing that she and La'an participated in Enterprise Bingo. Pike says he's proud of her and La'an for having some fun.
  • A fun scene between Neera, Una and Pike just after the trial- Something lighthearted to juxtapose the tension of the courtroom. Neera raises an eyerbow at Una 'seriously this guy?!! Have you seen his hair?!" Pike blushes, Una rolls her eyes. Pike is sheepish when he realises that after forcing Neera to travel across the galaxy to defend Una that he doesn't have anyway to return her to Illyria (it's not like the admirals are gonna let The Enterprise take a detour to that Non Federation colony right now). Neera commenting that unlike Una, his dimples don't work on her when he tries to apologize. Neera shakes her head and says she's already got a lift.
  • Una's return after the trial, Pike recounting all that she missed - Explaining all the stuff he did (abandon Enterprise against Star Fleet's orders, commandeer a spacecraft, go to Illyria, almost asphyxiate, find Una's old friend and the best civil rights lawyer and haul her ass to Earth...all to save his friend and keep Una in Star Fleet. Una yelling at him that he's so stupid to have risked his entire career, everything he'd ever worked for, for just her. Chris telling her quite frankly he can't do this without her, that he wasn't just going to abandon a friend he's had for decades. If they hadn't talked about her being Illyrian already this scene would be even more important. ALL the feelings need to come out here. It's raw, it's vulnerable, they're both crying, there's another hug.
  • Pike explaining the Illyrians' origin secrets that Spock and he found out (see The Illyrian Enigma comic) - I know he promised the Illyrians he wouldn't reveal it, but I figure Una is fair game, it is her heritage after all. Now that Pike has interacted with more Illyrians, and now know's a major historical secret, this would be an opportunity for Una to share some of her more personal experiences as an Illyrian (maybe). Now that she doesn't have to hide. Una is shocked that Pike reveals there may be other Illyrians in Star Fleet, he asks her what she wants to do. Una tells him she just wants to go back and do her job...but there's tension as she's torn between being selfish (focusing on protecting herself and her career) and helping others out there.
  • Debrief after Subspace Rhapsody - There's no way Una does not tease Chris mercilessly for lying to his girlfriend and being outed about it in song IN FRONT OF THE ENTIRE bridge. On a serious note, I think Chris would also want to talk about Una's song 'Keeping Secrets' and what that meant. I think he'd be hurt by the lyrics of her song, that she always felt alone when he was right by her side through their careers. They'd have to have a tough conversation about the fact that Una had to hide, and she felt she had to to protect him, but also the joy now that she doesn't have to anymore. Something to talk about how things have changed now, and that she's figuring who she is now she doesn't have to hide.
  • Drinks after Boimler and Mariner go back to the future - Oh what a day. Like I know the episode ends with all the Enterprise crew drinking in Pike's quarters. But like, it would be cute to have a scene with Una giving Pike a birthday present and them talking about how they're actually feeling given events of the day. Like Una has to work through feelings that she's suddenly a Star Fleet pinup in the future even though right now a lot of people in the Fleet hate her. She'll joke about them being ahead of the times in celebrating a holiday (his birthday) 200 years before its cool and Chris would look sad. They'll talk about his future, but also what he wants his legacy to be.

I have more but this is already super super long....

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carter-sg-1

Yessss! To all of the above! So…. Who can we rope into writing at least some of this? 😁 @curator-on-ao3 *nudge, nudge* 🥹

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50 tips for (fanfic) writing

  1. have fun
  2. write whatever is interesting to you, even if it won’t be interesting to anyone else
  3. appreciate kudos when they come, but don’t expect them
  4. appreciate comments when they come, but don’t expect them
  5. if you wish you could just write that one scene you have in your head, do that. you don’t need to create a 30K backstory for it first.
  6. embrace one shots
  7. embrace drabbles
  8. embrace writing your story out of order
  9. rough drafts are meant to be rough. if you can’t think of a word, put in a placeholder for it and keep going
  10. try not to get stuck on the little things
  11. it’s okay if your readers can’t see the picture inside of your head
  12. some people work well when they have a posting schedule. some people work well when they don’t. it’s okay if you don’t know which kind of person you are, and it’s okay if the type of person you are changes over time.
  13. if a rule you created for yourself isn’t working for you, get rid of that rule.
  14. make fandom friends. even if they don’t read your fic, they’ll cheer you on while you write it.
  15. cheer on other writers you know. you’ll be cheering yourself at the same time.
  16. no trope or genre is better or worse than another one. they all just appeal to different audiences.
  17. quality and popularity are not the same thing, although they do sometimes overlap
  18. numbers and statistics will never tell you whether or not you’re a good writer. they will never tell you how valuable you are as a person. 
  19. you belong in fandom if you want to be there
  20. you’re a writer as soon as you start writing things
  21. writing and posting are two different things. your story is still worth writing, even if you never plan to share it
  22. you don’t need to apologize for what you write or what you post. 
  23. don’t worry about taking up too much space. the internet doesn’t have a maximum size. 
  24. keep your readers in mind when you’re tagging your content. how could they search for your fic? if you use a tag, will be a reader who loves that tag be satisfied with how much it appears in your story?
  25. if you have a relationship in your fic that plays a minor role, tag it in the Additional Tags section instead of the Relationship section so that people who love that ship don’t get their hopes up
  26. be cautious when looking at bookmarks on your fic. they aren’t “extra comments.” that’s a space where readers make notes for themselves and each other, not for authors. 
  27. you don’t need to know everything about canon before you start writing fic
  28. you don’t need to read fic in the same fandoms you write for
  29. you don’t need to read fic at all in order to write it
  30. love your work because sometimes you’re the only one who will - and that’s okay
  31. if your hobby starts feeling like a job, you might need to take a break before you get burnt out
  32. if you get stuck on a story, you can always start a new one
  33. if you fall out of love with a story, you can always stop writing it. if you’re worried about your readers, you can always give them a bullet point summary of where you were planning to go with thing. for a lot of people, that’s satisfying and provides closure
  34. if you get hate, report it
  35. use the tools at your disposal to block hate before it can come in (limiting or turning off comments, limiting or turning off asks, blocking users, etc)
  36. try replying to comments sometimes. it can be a lovely way to make fandom friends
  37. don’t be afraid to reblog your own writing posts.
  38. if you get stuck on your summary, just write 1) who the story is about 2) what they are doing and 3) what problem gets in their way
  39. notice when your writing makes you smile. that moment is a gift. enjoy it.
  40. notice when your writing makes you cry. that moment is a gift, too.
  41. even if you’re disappointed in how your story turned out, there’s something in there that’s fantastic. find that thing and focus on it and feel proud.
  42. some ideas are ones you want to write. some are ones you want to read. if you ever have too many ideas to deal with at once, give some of the latter ones away to someone else. 
  43. sometimes the things you write will be really personal. be careful about putting them where other people can comment. they won’t know how personal it is for you, and you need to remember that comments aren’t about you, they’re about the story.
  44. remember that you can write series as well as stories. if the story is done but you still have passion or ideas, start a new one in the same universe.
  45. enjoy the satisfaction of finishing a story. savour it. bask in it a little while.
  46. don’t feel guilty about abandoning a story. not every story gets finished, and that’s okay
  47. you can have separate accounts for different fandoms. you can have one account with a million fandoms in it. do whatever works for you.
  48. sometimes writing is more important than sleep - but only sometimes
  49. it doesn’t matter if that story has been written before by someone else. it doesn’t matter if it was written by you. write it again.
  50. only follow the advice that makes sense to you. the rest isn’t important.
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