I want whumper to start bragging to caretaker about what they put whumpee through. I want them to tell the tales with a smile on their face and watch grinning as caretaker's expression changes more with each one.

But see, I don't want caretaker to become disgusted, or call whumper a sadistic monster, or start thinking "poor whumpee" just yet. I want caretaker to look up slowly, and make unbreakable eye contact with whumper as they half whisper, "I'm going to fucking kill you."

And whumper shivers.

i love characters passing out as much as the next person, but i feel like greying out has Just As Much potential, and I hardly ever see it in fics!

In general I love this trope as a filler for what happens when a character passes out and gets transported from Point A to Point B – after all, where’s the fun in whump if you’re too unconscious to feel it?

Stress-Induced Physical Whump

Underrated whumpy line: "On your best behaviour, now."

Murmured under somebody's breath into an ear, or mockingly before throwing doors open to go into a crowd. When they have you backed into a corner and you both know it.

Stole this from twitter

you know what trope drives me absolutely feral? Repetition. Just :

So I know how claiming something as a funny story and finding humor in it is a trauma response.

So imagine Whumpee going "Funny story- proceeds to dump the horrid torture Whumper put them through." And Caretaker is just horrified while Whumpee is chuckling.

tiny little reminder (scream for help) that i have a ko-fi :) i put some previews of wips on there sometimes and also pictures of my cat :) please consider helping me stay alive :) i despise asking for help like this and i am slightly playing it up as a joke because of that but i am running out of ways to support myself :)

alternatively if you’d like to get something in return i have a book available on Amazon! or you can commission me to write or draw something for you, also on ko-fi (or in dms)! in fact i like these options more bc they make me feel less bad about asking for money from well-meaning strangers to support my horrible whumpy endeavours!

sigh. oh to make ocs with other people. oh to collaborate on a narrative theres literally nothing more magical than that to me

this post is getting notes again so i just want to say. reach out to your friends about this guys. just be like hey. wanna make some sillies

“Eyes straight ahead, dear,” Whumper cooed as they walked behind the other, their hand delicately trailing pver each weapon as if they were each glass which could shatter under the slightest touch.

Whumpee bit their lip, their body trembling as they tried to hold in their sobs. But it was no use. Tears streamed down their face as they squeezed their eyes shut tight.

“Be good for me darling, and this won’t last any longer than it has to…”

Tw: Vampire Whump | Vampire Whumper | Kidnapping | Noncon Vampire Feeding | Stalking (let me know if I need to add any!)

The city was bathed in the soft glow of the full autumns moon hung high in the sky, the soft glow of streetlights, casting long, eerie shadows across the empty sidewalks.

In this urban labyrinth, Whumpee, a young and unsuspecting individual, hurried through the narrow alleyways, unaware that they were being stalked by a predator of the darkest kind.

Whumper, a modern vampire with a taste for the thrill of the chase, had spotted Whumpee earlier in a bustling cafe, their heart racing as they sensed the sweet aroma of innocence that clung to their chosen prey.

As Whumpee turned the corner, they were startled to find themselves face to face with Whumper, who had been lurking in the shadows, just out of sight, now stepped into the dim light, a charming smile playing on their lips.

I love a freeze response. I love a character who doesn't fight, or flee, or even fawn: someone whose whole body locks up and goes still, unable to save themselves or try to do anything at all, until it's too late.

I especially love when the story involves them fighting or finding their way out later on.

Whumpees getting taken from public spaces <3

In areas with lots of people, so much noise and so many eyes to notice- Surely, nobody could take them from such an open space? But,

When whumper's hand comes over their mouth and drags them into their car, nobody notices a thing.

Its a cliche at this point but damn shaving scenes.

Give a blade to a whumpee and tell them to take it up so close to your neck knowing they wouldnt dare to kill you even if they got a blade to your throat.

Biggest power play ever.

Bonus points if caretakers watching :)