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Yours sinfully, Quiche

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22 | MLQC fic writer | Fanfics | THG trilogy & TBOSAS | Yuzuru Hanyu | Kalafina | Anime | Manga | Gavin's my hot chocolate
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Welcome Sinners...

Quiche's note: Before exploring my world of writings, please note that this blog contains both SFW and NSFW works and posts. All the NSFW works will be clearly notified. Regardless, unavoidable circumstances would often arise. All I ask is that you understand your decisions and take responsibility for them.

Thank you. Yours sinfully, Quiche💖

Masterlist: My World

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Edit Note: I'm really amazed by how much love this post got. Guess it just shows we're all in the same boat. I do have other humorous writing memes on this tumblr under the same tag, if you're interested. Never give up writing! ❤️

Edit Note 2: I can't believe this has reached 10000+ notes. Been on tumblr for almost ten years (different account) and nothing like this has ever happened before. Thank you! 😊

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thoughtkick
“Memories are what warm you up from the inside. But they’re also what tear you apart.”

Haruki Murakami

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heartbreak through body language in Men

  • A drooping posture can convey a sense of defeat and sadness. Keep shoulders slightly slouched, and avoid standing tall or with a straight back.
  • Facial expressions play a crucial role. A downturned mouth, furrowed brows, and a distant or vacant gaze can all indicate inner turmoil and heartache.
  • Men often avoid eye contact when they're feeling vulnerable. If you're experiencing heartbreak, you might find yourself looking down or away when speaking to others.
  • Restlessness can manifest in various forms, such as tapping fingers, bouncing legs, or constantly shifting positions. This indicates inner turmoil and an inability to find peace.
  • Movements may become slower and less purposeful when someone is experiencing emotional pain. This can include gestures like reaching for objects or adjusting clothing.
  • Men in heartbreak might withdraw from social interactions or participate less actively in conversations. They may seem physically present but emotionally distant.
  • Deep, heavy sighs are often involuntary reactions to emotional distress. They signify a release of tension and an underlying sense of sadness.
  • Heartbreak can drain one's energy. You may notice a decrease in enthusiasm, vitality, and overall liveliness in how you carry yourself and engage with others.
  • Crossing arms, hunching shoulders forward, or clasping hands in front of the body can create a barrier between oneself and others, reflecting emotional guardedness and pain.
  • Gestures may become less expressive and more restrained. Hand movements may be smaller in scale and less animated compared to usual.
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There's a lot of different ways to look at the editing process but this is personally what works for me:

Draft 1. Just get the story down. You can go back and look at things for consistency's sake but honestly don't worry about anything but getting your ideas down.

Draft 2. Make it make sense. This could be as simple as rewriting a line where you said a character is blond but is actually a brunette, or as complicated as completely deleting and/or rewriting a certain scene. Usually it's a combo of both.

Draft 3. All about character. Are your character's actions consistent? Would they really say that line? Are you sure?

Draft 4. All about style. Would that character really say that word? Does that paragraph have a good enough transition? ect.

Draft 5. Just another go around of the two above. Character consistency and style are very important, my friends, and you may need another Passover.

Draft 6. Spelling, flow, ect. You're reaching the end now. Polish it up.

Draft 7. Just reread It 3-5 times. Edit anything and everything you can.

This, this is what I needed. Thank you!

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xingxueyue

BaiQi Wish Tree Event: Half Life The Prisoners

Date: 8 May 2024 to 14 May 2024

Yooo, I need some context because they’re looking so psychotic in that second pic like…

WHAT IS GOING ON HERE???

I was just about to say they look psychotic. Why is Gavin looking like a deranged person when there's a knife IN HIM??

And why is MC smiling gleefully while stabbing him.

And Gavin is holding a giant axe as if he's about to strike someone

Did PG accidentally put out their Halloween karmas or something?

What is going on??

Also interesting thing to note (not really that interesting) but Gavin's stud is red like blood

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bakwaaas

‘relationships are work’ means ‘you have to put effort into loving each other intentionally & learning how to love each other and communicating properly’ not ‘your relationship makes you feel stressed and sad most of the time & the other person disrespects you and treats you bad but you stay anyway’

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