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Stop fucking reblogging this
Stop fucking reblogging this
Here’s some screenshots of our favorite Sassy Boi
Happy Name Day, Virgil!
My love for him is out of control at this point.
Phil holding a succulent in 24?
edit: the one about abuse
👍done and gone, I don't want to disrespect their wishes.
since the op took that down you should probably take down your last reblog.
Thanks for telling me, I did.
dan calling himself a bitch is gay culture
dan calling phil a bitch is gay culture
Guys, gals, and non binary pals
Ladies, gentlemen, and variations thereof
Folks
Distinguished guests
Members of the jury
Comrades
Fellow Americans
Citizens of the solar system
All y’all
My dudes
Those who must be stopped
Persons of the audience
Brain owners
Sentient beings of the audience
Bitches
People with PHDs and people without PHDs
All you who got dressed up for no reason
You people
Humans
Lovable idiots
Ladies, germs, and non binary worms
Mouth breathers
Everyone except (insert name here)
“Members of the jury” works best if you are not, in fact, addressing a jury.
These are facts.
Removing excess words. If you don’t need particular words, why keep them?
Showing instead of telling. Making the reader feel what the protagonist feels is almost always better than telling them the protagonist is undergoing something.
Removing passive voice. Active voice is more engaging and should be always be used unless you have a specific reason not to use it for that sentence.
Always remember though: you have to do what works best for that particular moment. Some scenes require different strokes than others. Use your best judgement, and take pride in your personal writing style.
Hey! Do you have any advice for writing about really young children and babies?
Babies usually learn how to sit up at 4 to 7 months, to crawl at about 7 to 10 months, to stand up at 9 to 10 months, and to walk at 9 to 12 months. Babies can learn to talk as early as 6 months, though they only start to form two to four word sentences from 18 months to 2 years old.
Babies are cute little bundles of joy that lighten up the entire household, though they do have their moments.
My biggest pet peeve about people who write babies into their stories is that they only concentrate on the cons. The baby is always crying and annoying the characters, who make snide remarks about how they wish it would shut up.
The writers set it up so that the baby sounds like more of a burden than anything else, and unless your other characters don’t want the baby and feel like it is a burden, then I highly suggest you switch it up and describe the happy moments that the characters have with their babies, too.
Contrary to popular belief, whenever a baby cries it does not mean that it needs to be fed or that it has pooped itself. Babies cry over all sorts of things because they literally have no other way to communicate when they’re unhappy.
They cry when they’re tired.
They cry when they’re left alone. (Separation anxiety is very prevalent in babies, who feel afraid and unsafe whenever their guardians are not with them
They cry when they’re frustrated and can’t do the things that their parents and siblings can do.
They cry when they’re scared.
They cry when they are left with the parent that isn’t their favorite. (This usually happens to dads when the babies are left in their care)
This may sound annoying, but babies are just trying to make it known that they’re unhappy. They can’t say “Hey, I’m upset, can you help me?” so their only other option is to cry. Since they’re young, these things that are happening to them are the WORST things they’ve ever experienced. When a baby throws a fit over a broken toy or separation anxiety, that’s probably because it’s the scariest and most heartbreaking thing that has ever happened to them!
This is literally a young human person. They’re just as aware and alert as you and I, and they need constant stimulation to keep happy. Parents really have it cut out for them; they have to raise this little human larva into a fully grown homo sapien that will function well in society, and in order to do that they have to provide a lot of TLC to make sure the baby’s mind develops correctly.
A lot of parents in stories don’t do this; they only give their baby attention when it’s crying and I can’t help but think: that’s not??? How it works????
Things that parents do for their children to help them develop:
Read books
Sing songs
Play with toys with them
Play games like peek-a-boo and patty cake
Put on music
Put on educational TV and movies (Though they shouldn’t do this too often!)
Simply be around them
This is a given. Babies can get themselves into a lot of trouble: They can roll of couches, touch hot or sharp objects, and eat things that they shouldn’t. Babies have to be under constant supervision, and it gets me really annoyed when characters in stories leave their child unattended for a long time.
- Crib
- Bib
- Pacifier/Binky
- Bottle and formula (If parents don’t breastfeed)
**FYI babies on formula or breast milk need to be burped after they’re fed because they swallow air and can have gas buildup within their stomach and intestines. Some babies need to be burped a lot, while others don’t; it all depends on the baby, though bottle fed babies tend to swallow more air than breastfed ones.**
- Blankets and mats to lie on
- Toys (LOTS of them!)
- High chair
- Baby friendly food (for older babies that are off formula, which occurs after the sixth month mark), which can include actual baby food, Cheerios, fruit that is cut into small pieces, animal crackers, and anything that can be eaten with fingers that can’t be choked on.
This is especially if they’re first time parents. Babies are a BIG DEAL, and they become the most important things in their parents’ lives. They’re always thinking about the baby and can tend to worry a LOT when they’re separated from them. They take many precautions, such as baby-proofing the house, to keep their little ones safe, and most parents would take a bullet for their baby.
If the parents in your story don’t fret over their baby at least once, then you’re writing baby parents wrong.
Many important milestones in a human’s life happen during these critical years. They start forming complete sentences and developing social skills. They learn that to get what they want they don’t just have to cry; they can communicate in other ways, though sometimes they take to crying if they don’t get their way.
Toddlers can be marginally more worrisome than babies; they’re mobile now, so they can now reach higher and move around faster than their younger counterparts. Their crying no longer is cute, but rather more annoying now that they’re older and are starting to develop their personalities, and there’s a reason why they’re called “The terrible twos”
Toddlers are just like upgraded babies that need most of the things babies do but can now communicate, walk, and eat real food.
However, the most important thing writers should know: TODDLERS ARE NOT SAGES
They should not be spouting deep, philosophical life lessons at every turn; that aspect of children that’s been developed in books, about how they “know things” just because they’re young and innocent, is completely false. One or two meaningful lines should be fine, but remember that they’re still kids; they like talking about dinosaurs, superheroes, princesses, animals, and trucks, and 98% of their dialogue should merely be them being a kid.
Note that you can still do whatever you want to and even if your OC is a ginger named ginger then thats totally fine - its your story. These are just preferences of mine
I hope this helped! Feel free to add on
Having trouble deciding what role is best to give your character(s)? Well then, here is a collection of medieval-fantasy type jobs (both historical and fictional) in alphabetical order that can help you choose the right one.
If there are more you want to add to the list, feel free to reblog and share your suggestions. The more the merrier!
(Note: Some jobs listed here are probably the same as certain others but with a different title.)
- eye contact. lots n lots of eye contact.
- other characters having to clear their throats, shake people, etc. to get A* and B* to pay attention
- lip biting.
- A* and B* looking at each other real quick, then looking away.
- almost kissing but being interupted
- normal coupley teasing
- coupley teasing that goes rly far
- friendly teasing that becomes awkward, tense, or sexual
- more eye contact
- lots of small touches
feel free to add to this!
Dialogue: either you’re great at it, or it’s your worse nightmare. Writing dialogue can be difficult, confusing, and frustrating. Here are some tips to clear the air when it comes to dialogue!
DON’T overuse dialogue tags
From the very beginning, writers are often told not to overuse “said”. While this is sound advice, it can create the false notion that “said” is never to be used. This simply isn’t true!
Stay away from repeating creative dialogue tags one after another, especially if it’s redundant. For example, if there’s an exclamation point after a sentence, you don’t need to say that the character exclaimed or yelled.
Often, a dialogue tag isn’t even needed. Just end the dialogue without a tag.
DO use “said”
Repeat after me: IT IS OKAY TO USE “SAID”!
I’m guilty of this one as well. The urge to not use “said” too often becomes a habit of never using it and replacing it with unnecessary dialogue tags.
Just use said! It will make your writing seem far more mature than if you used something like “growled” or “stated”.
DON’T go on tangents
Dialogue should be realistic. If you have a character that is known for going off on tangents, then by all means do so. If you’re going on a tangent to seem “artistic”, you might want to cut it off there.
My biggest pet peeve with modern young adult literature is that writers try to combing their need to prove they can write beautiful prose with dialogue. Don’t. In the end, it’s just unrealistic and a cheap way of trying to show your talent. Leave the long-winded metaphors for your narration, please.
DO use unique speech
Everyone speaks differently. This could mean accents, slang, catchphrases, or misused words. Include this in your dialogue!
Colorful dialogue creates colorful characters, and allows the reader to be able to easily distinguish who is speaking (without dialogue tags!).
DON’T overuse phonetics
Though accents can be a great way to create colorful dialogue, phonetically spelling every word according to the character’s accent can get annoying fast. Stick to spelling out the most important words. After a while, the reader should be able to read that character’s dialogue with their accent in mind anyway.
DO show, not tell
Every writer has received this advice at one point or another, but with good reason. Dialogue is the best way to put “show, don’t tell” into practice. However, writers often think that dialogue itself counts as showing. Though dialogue is a better tool than description in these instances, it doesn’t completely serve as a way to show on its own.
Telling: “Hey, calm down. You look nervous.”
Showing: “Hey, calm down. You haven’t stopped tapping your foot since we got here.”
DON’T repeat names too often
I too fall into the trap of constantly clarifying who is speaking. When you’re writing, it feels natural to say things like “’How are you doing, Jim?’ ‘I’m doing well, Pam.’”, but the reality is that no one speaks like that, especially to people they’re close to.
Most of the time, you should use names in dialogue tags and greetings. Otherwise, use names sparingly.