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My World of Writing and Memories

@abitscripturient / abitscripturient.tumblr.com

Scripturient (adj.) having an consuming passion to write. Bit - 38 - TX: Photographer and novel creator of multicultural erotic romance, fantasy romance and supernatural. Wattpad writer 18+
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Bit/Bitzsoi/Brittney/Me

Pen Name: Bitzsoi

Age: 38

Location: Fort Worth, TX

Other Tumblr Blogs: @lareinabit (main), @bitzsims (simblr)  @birdwind-days (nooklr)

Wattpad: Bitzsoi

Three words that describe me: Imaginative, emotional and goofy

Five things that make my life whole: my heavenly Father, my family, my gifts (writing, photography), my love of food and my love of music

Who Am I Really: I’m a stay at home mom to a sassy little gamer girl and a wife to a Mexican spicy enchilada. I’m in between jobs, but I’m confident I’ll find one soon. I have Aspergers and deal with social challenges so very much in my life but I’m still a person that people can hang with as a friend. I’m always wanting more friends; be it online or here in Texas. Even though the virus makes that tougher. I once read that being a writer is a lonely road and that can’t be more correct so I want to change that. I love to write and have been writing ever since I was eleven. I also love video games/PC games, singing, watching good anime or shows like Stranger Things and Outlander.

What Genres Do I Write: Mostly erotic romance, but I do write fantasy romance, a Greek mythology supernatural and a mixture of sci-fi and action.

What you will see in my Writeblr: First and foremost this is and will always be a 18+ blog meaning there will be smut in it. There won’t be smut in every single post of course but I can’t in good conscience tell you that there won’t be any. I will also post writing tips or tips that are relevant to my various stories, past and present prompt pieces I have written, ask games, tag games and reblogs of my other favorite writing from other writers here in Tumblr. From time to time there will be some photos of my life here and there so you can get to know me as a person.

Some of my fave mutuals:  @catharticallysarcastic @kainablue @ladywithalamp @daftydrafty@homesteadchronicles@kasey-writes

My ultimate writing goal: I want to get my first book Oxytocin edited and published and finish the second book Vena Cava to share. 

My WIPs and OTPs: I have nine so far and hopefully not counting. You never know though. Clicking on the name of the WIP will take you to the inspo blog associated while clicking on the the word tag will take you to the tagged posts.

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Tag   

Released Rain (AC III Fanfiction)

  • Raina and Connor

You can find out more about the wips here

Yes, I know I have a lot of series but I’m a fan of continuing the story so my stories tend to be on the longer side. With this blog I hope to continue to learn so that I can finally finish my books as well as share with others. I can’t wait to meet more of you writers but if any of you write romance, erotica or erotic romance I’d especially love to meet you and mutual follow!

What do I look like: This!

Liking me so far? That’s excellent! Keep on reading my posts down below and have fun. 

Please don’t ever hesitate to chat me up, comment or follow. I love meeting new folks so it will make my day. Happy writing!

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Describing Facial Expressions

-> feel free to edit and adjust pronouns as you see fit.

Eyes and Eyebrows:

  • His eyes widened
  • Her eyes went round
  • Their eyes narrowed
  • His eyes lit up
  • Her eyes darted
  • They squinted
  • He blinked
  • Her eyes twinkled with...
  • Their eyes gleamed with...
  • His eyes flashed with...
  • Her eyes burned with...
  • Their eyes blazed with...
  • - glowed in his eyes
  • The corners of her eyes crinkled
  • They rolled their eyes
  • He winked
  • Tears filled her eyes
  • Their eyes welled with tears
  • His eyes swam with tears
  • Tears flooded her eyes
  • Tears shimmered in their eyes
  • Tears shone in his eyes
  • Her eyes were glossy
  • They were fighting back tears
  • Tears ran down his cheeks
  • She squeezed her eyes shut
  • Their lashes fluttered
  • She batted her lashes
  • His brows knitted
  • Their forehead creased
  • She furrowed her brows
  • A line appeared between his brows
  • Their brows drew together
  • She raised a brow
  • His eyebrows rose
  • They lifted a brow
  • She wagged her eyebrows
  • He gave them a once-over
  • They sized
  • Her eyes bore into them
  • He took in the sight of...
  • They glared
  • She peered
  • He gazed
  • They glanced
  • She stared
  • He scrutinized
  • They studied
  • She gaped
  • He observed
  • They surveyed
  • She gawked
  • He leered
  • Their pupils dilated

Nose:

  • Her nose crinkled
  • His nose wrinkled
  • They sneered
  • Her nostrils glared
  • He stuck his nose up
  • They sniffed
  • She sniffled
  • He scrunched his nose

Mouth:

  • She smiled
  • He smirked
  • They grinned
  • She simpered
  • He beamed
  • Their mouth curved into a smile
  • The corners of his mouth turned up
  • The corner of her mouth quirked up
  • A corner of their mouth lifted
  • Her mouth twitched
  • He gave a half-smile
  • They gave a lopsided grin
  • His mouth twisted
  • She plastered a smile on her face
  • They forced a smile
  • He faked a smile
  • Her smile faded
  • Their smile slipped
  • He pursed his lips
  • She pouted
  • Their mouth snapped shut
  • His mouth set in a hard line
  • Their lips were pressed into a thin line
  • She pressed her lips together
  • They bit their lip
  • He drew his lower lip between his teeth
  • She chewed on her bottom lip
  • Their jaw set
  • His jaw clenched
  • Their jaw tightened
  • A muscle in her jaw twitched
  • He ground his jaw
  • They snarled
  • Her lips drew back in a snarl
  • His mouth fell open
  • Their jaw dropped
  • Her jaw went slack
  • He gritted his teeth
  • They gnashed their teeth
  • Her lower lip trembled
  • His lower lip quivered
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Describing Food in Writing

I love food. And drinks.

When I think of the HP series, I recall the feasts. Treacle tarts and puddings. Butterbeer. Food trolley on the train and chocolate frogs in the Gryffindor common room.

Foods helps readers engage with the story, so it's good to know how to describe them.

Just one Adjective

  • There's really no need to go overboard with how a particular food tastes. If it's something that your readers are already familiar with, just add in a small detail.
  • Are the breakfast eggs yellow or white, clumpy or fluffy? Salty or bland? Grainy or silky?
  • Just one adjective/detail is enough.

Think of the Character

  • Take note of each character's palate while you describe. Especially if you're writing in 1st person POV.
  • Someone in your cast may be a culinary artist and another content with spray cheese.
  • Food descriptions can reveal a lot about character's personality and lifestyle.

Watch Food Shows

  • Master Chef. The Great British Baking Show. Aesthetic character baking channel on YouTube.
  • Food shows usually have a section where they assess/review the food made, which might be helpful.
  • Recently, I've noticed that 1-minute food reviewers on YT Shorts are pretty good at graphic yet succinct taste descriptions!

Ratatouille

  • I'm not kidding!
  • If you ever want to get into the mind of someone who is passionate about food, or need inspiration yourself - check this movie out.
  • Just watching Remy's passion and the magic of the culinary arts will boost your writer soul with inspiration (or something like it, anyway).

Experience Restaurants

  • The best research of all is probably experience, so the next time you eat a meal, challenge your palate.
  • Think about how it looks, tastes, and feels in you mouth.
  • If possible, try dishes your characters would eat and discern what they would detect. What elements of the disk would your character like?

Some Food Adjectives

  • Tangy Creamy Crispy Tender Juicy Exquisite Luscious Gourmet Wholesome Delectable Risk Zesty Succulent
  • Crunchy Greasy Gooey Tart Smoky Savory Marinated Meaty Moist Battered Dainty Homestyle Fudgy

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Want quick tips to add instant chemistry to the relationships of your characters??

(🥳With examples🥳)

First of all, I want to say that you can also use most of them for platonic/ non-romantic relationships, so feel free to use this tips however you think they might work better in your story. So, without further adue, let's get to the tips!!!

  1. Make your characters LISTEN to each other. Like, if A tells B they're not a morning person, B could make some coffee for A or lower the volume of their alarm.
  2. This might sound quite obvious, but show that you characters care for each other. It might be as simple as one of them giving the other a glass of water when they feel a little dizzy, but it works wonders!
  3. Make your characters physically close. When you are emotionally close to someone, you tend to be physically close too. But here is the thing. Make your characters react like it's second nature: "how would I not hug B when I haven't seen them in days?" or "Of course I'm gonna take A's hand when I feel insecure".
  4. They don't have to be constantly thinking about each other, but when they do, MAKE IT MATTER!! For example, character A is out shopping, and they see B's favorite cookies. B didn't have a good day, and A knows that. But A also knows B is gonna fucking love the cookies, so they buy some.
  5. Let them believe and trust each other. Also applies if one of them is a little distrustful: let your characters rely on one another, even if at the start they aren't as comfortable doing it. For a distrustful character, letting the other one help with chores might be a HUGE thing.

Other tips for writers: previous | next

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How to create an atmosphere: Supermarket

Sight

  • advertisements for products
  • big signs showing discounts
  • aisles full of colorful products
  • fresh produce
  • employees in matching uniforms
  • all different kinds of costumers
  • with shopping carts
  • with children running around
  • with a stroller or toddlers sitting in the shopping cart
  • with a service dog by their side

Hearing

  • the sound of shopping carts being pushed and bumping into shelves
  • parents calling for their children
  • people talking on the phone
  • a man asking his wife if they still have enough toilet paper at home
  • someone asking the employee where they can find something
  • music interrupted by announcements about promotions the store is doing
  • the surring and beeping sound of the cash register belt
  • the sound of the electronic doors opening and shutting again

Touch

  • the stickiness of the floors
  • the differents textures of each item they think about buying
  • the coldness and often stickiness of the handle of the shopping cart
  • the sudden wetness from some products that are either fresh produce or where the package is leaking

Smell

  • the smell of spilled drinks that someone dropped and left for the employees to clean up
  • the smell of cleaning products from them having to sweep it up
  • the smell of hand sanitizer
  • the smell of different products the costumer holds up to their face and smells to decide if they like it
  • the horrendous smell of deposit machines where you return your not quite empty beer bottles to and the leftover liquid spills everywhere

Taste

  • different samples offered at the supermarket

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The dust tickled my nose as I glanced up at the hole on our roof. My eyes then watched my best friend enter the doomed attic.

"Be careful, Michaela…I'm for real."

Mickey inched forward, caution all in her stance.

"Firebird, you worry too much. I'm sure there's noth-eek!"

My eyes followed hers to the furry brown head that popped out of a hole for a second before disappearing again. After hearing Mic's scream, that was all I saw…

If I was a track runner at that moment, I would have won gold!

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”oh so how did you get into writing?-“ no, writing got into me. Actually it infiltrated my brain, starting with the slow takeover of my room with books to the extremely fast claiming of my notes app and now there’s no way to stop it and no way for me to stop.

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Things That May Be Causing Your Writer's Block- and How to Beat Them

I don't like the term 'Writer's Block' - not because it isn't real, but because the term is so vague that it's useless. Hundreds of issues all get lumped together under this one umbrella, making writer's block seem like this all-powerful boogeyman that's impossible to beat. Worse yet, it leaves people giving and receiving advice that is completely ineffective because people often don't realize they're talking about entirely different issues.

In my experience, the key to beating writer's block is figuring out what the block even is, so I put together a list of Actual Reasons why you may be struggling to write:

(note that any case of writer's block is usually a mix of two or more)

Perfectionism (most common)

What it looks like:

  • You write one sentence and spend the next hour googling "synonyms for ___"
  • Write. Erase. Write. Rewrite. Erase.
  • Should I even start writing this scene when I haven't figured out this one specific detail yet?
  • I hate everything I write
  • Cringing while writing
  • My first draft must be perfect, or else I'm a terrible writer

Things that can help:

  • Give yourself permission to suck
  • Keep in mind that nothing you write is going to be perfect, especially your first draft
  • Think of writing your first/early drafts not as writing, but sketching out a loose foundation to build upon later
  • People write multiple drafts for a reason: write now, edit later
  • Stop googling synonyms and save that for editing
  • Write with a pen to reduce temptation to erase
  • Embrace leaving blank spaces in your writing when you can't think of the right word, name, or detail
  • It's okay if your writing sucks. We all suck at some point. Embrace the growth mindset, and focus on getting words on a page

Lack of inspiration (easiest to fix)

What it looks like:

  • Head empty, no ideas
  • What do I even write about???
  • I don't have a plot, I just have an image
  • Want to write but no story to write

Things that can help:

  • Google writing prompts
  • If writing prompts aren't your thing, instead try thinking about what kind of tropes/genres/story elements you would like to try out
  • Instead of thinking about the story you would like to write, think about the story you would like to read, and write that
  • It's okay if you don't have a fully fleshed out story idea. Even if it's just an image or a line of dialogue, it's okay to write that. A story may or may not come out of it, but at least you got the creative juices flowing
  • Stop writing. Step away from your desk and let yourself naturally get inspired. Go for a walk, read a book, travel, play video games, research history, etc. Don't force ideas, but do open up your mind to them
  • If you're like me, world-building may come more naturally than plotting. Design the world first and let the story come later

Boredom/Understimulation (lost the flow)

What it looks like:

  • I know I should be writing but uugggghhhh I just can'tttttt
  • Writing words feels like pulling teeth
  • I started writing, but then I got bored/distracted
  • I enjoy the idea of writing, but the actual process makes me want to throw my laptop out the window

Things that can help:

  • Introduce stimulation: snacks, beverages, gum, music such as lo-fi, blankets, decorate your writing space, get a clickity-clackity keyboard, etc.
  • Add variety: write in a new location, try a new idea/different story for a day or so, switch up how you write (pen and paper vs. computer) or try voice recording or speech-to-text
  • Gamify writing: create an arbitrary challenge, such as trying to see how many words you can write in a set time and try to beat your high score
  • Find a writing buddy or join a writer's group
  • Give yourself a reward for every writing milestone, even if it's just writing a paragraph
  • Ask yourself whether this project you're working on is something you really want to be doing, and be honest with your answer

Intimidation/Procrastination (often related to perfectionism, but not always)

What it looks like:

  • I was feeling really motivated to write, but then I opened my laptop
  • I don't even know where to start
  • I love writing, but I can never seem to get started
  • I'll write tomorrow. I mean next week. Next month? Next month, I swear (doesn't write next month)
  • Can't find the time or energy
  • Unreasonable expectations (I should be able to write 10,000 words a day, right????)
  • Feeling discouraged and wondering why I'm even trying

Things that can help:

  • Follow the 2 min rule (or the 1 paragraph rule, which works better for me): whenever you sit down to write, tell yourself that you are only going to write for 2 minutes. If you feel like continuing once the 2 mins are up, go for it! Otherwise, stop. Force yourself to start but DO NOT force yourself to continue unless you feel like it. The more often you do this, the easier it will be to get started
  • Make getting started as easy as possible (i.e. minimize barriers: if getting up to get a notebook is stopping you from getting started, then write in the notes app of your phone)
  • Commit to a routine that will work for you. Baby steps are important here. Go with something that feels reasonable: every day, every other day, once a week, twice a week, and use cues to help you remember to start. If you chose a set time to write, just make sure that it's a time that feels natural to you- i.e. don't force yourself to writing at 9am every morning if you're not a morning person
  • Find a friend or a writing buddy you can trust and talk it out or share a piece of work you're proud of. Sometimes we just get a bit bogged down by criticism- either internal or external- and need a few words of encouragement

The Problem's Not You, It's Your Story (or Outline (or Process))

What it looks like:

  • I have no problems writing other scenes, it's just this scene
  • I started writing, but now I have no idea where I'm going
  • I don't think I'm doing this right
  • What's an outline?
  • Drowning in documents
  • This. Doesn't. Make. Sense. How do I get from this plot point to this one?!?!?! (this ColeyDoesThings quote lives in my head rent free cause BOY have I been there)

Things That Can Help:

  • Go back to the drawing board. Really try to get at the root of why a scene or story isn't working
  • A part of growing as a writer is learning when to kill your darlings. Sometimes you're trying to force an idea or scene that just doesn't work and you need to let it go
  • If you don't have an outline, write one
  • If you have an outline and it isn't working, rewrite it, or look up different ways to structure it
  • You may be trying to write as a pantser when you're really a plotter or vice versa. Experiment with different writing processes and see what feels most natural
  • Study story structures, starting with the three act structure. Even if you don't use them, you should know them
  • Check out Ellen Brock on YouTube. She's a professional novel editor who has a lot of advice on writing strategies for different types of writers
  • Also check out Savage Books on YouTube (another professional story editor) for advice on story structure and dialogue. Seriously, I cannot recommend this guy enough

Executive Dysfunction, Usually From ADHD/Autism

What it looks like:

  • Everything in boredom/understimulation
  • Everything in intimidation/procrastination
  • You have been diagnosed with and/or have symptoms of ADHD/Autism

Things that can help:

  • If you haven't already, seek a diagnosis or professional treatment
  • Hire an ADHD coach or other specialist that can help you work with your brain (I use Shimmer; feel free to DM me for a referral)
  • Seek out neurodiverse communities for advice and support
  • Try body doubling! There's lot's of free online body doubling websites out there for you to try. If social anxiety is a barrier, start out with writing streams such as katecavanaughwrites on Twitch
  • Be aware of any sensory barriers that may be getting in the way of you writing (such as an uncomfortable desk chair, harsh lighting, bad sounds)

And Lastly, Burnout, Depression, or Other Mental Illness

What it looks like:

  • You have symptoms of burnout or depression
  • Struggling with all things, not just writing
  • It's more than a lack of inspiration- the spark is just dead

Things that can help:

  • Forget writing for now. Focus on healing first.
  • Seek professional help
  • If you feel like it, use writing as a way to explore your feelings. It can take the form of journaling, poetry, an abstract reflection of your thoughts, narrative essays, or exploring what you're feeling through your fictional characters. The last two helped me rediscover my love of writing after I thought years of depression had killed it for good. Just don't force yourself to do so, and stop if it takes you to a darker place instead of feeling cathartic
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