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my personal ramblings

@rosecoloredkay / rosecoloredkay.tumblr.com

Kay 23 (they/them, she/her) Just your local nerd librarian.  I also have an AO3 account: RoseColoredKay (Image in my side bar does not belong to me. It belongs to newsiesthemusical.com) :)
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redasatomato

It’s the season of fall(ing in love!) 💙❤️ Monday, September 23
 The First Day of Autumn (Autumnal Equinox) 🍁🍂

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tittytron

tumblr friendships are hard to maintain like im sorry i know i havent talked to you in 5 months but you’re still super rad and i still consider us friends im just dumb

If I have ever messaged you or messaged me and never heard from me again, I still consider us friends. I just suck

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athena1138

Even if we’ve never messaged, I consider us friends.

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daedricsheep

I don’t do tumblr the same way I used to, but what crit in the tags is right. “If we’re mutuals we’re friends.” Ezpz.

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me: okay time to jump into the action scene

me: don’t say it

me: don’t say it

me: don’t say it

me: don’t say it

me: don’t say it

me: don’t say it

me: don’t say it

me: don’t say it

me: … “SUDDENLY”

My go-to fixes for this:

  1. but before [Character] could [verb], ACTION!
  2. [Character] was about to [verb] when ACTION!
  3. but no sooner had [something] than ACTION!
  4. but just as [something boring], ACTION!
  5. BANG!/CRASH!/BOOM! ACTION!
  6. “Character dialogue starting some sentence about–” ACTION!
  7. Character’s internal monologue starting some sentACTION!
  8. Narrator starting some– ACTION!
  9. ACTION!

Why extend your readers the courtesy of a ‘suddenly’ except to vary sentence structure?

Don’t call me out like this 🤣

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REY I’M HERE TO BRING PROOF OF GENDERFLUID LOKI BC I DIDN’T READ ALL OF AGENT OF ASGARD 3 TIMES IN A MONTH TO NOT BRING OUT THESE SCREENCAPS WHENEVER I CAN

oh my god this is so cool???

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Am I writing a Titanic Javey fic you ask? YOU BET YOUR SWEET ASS I AM.

Here you are! The first chapter of You Jump, I Jump is live on AO3! 

Let me know your thoughts about the story! I live for feed back as it helps me become a better writer! Also side note, I somewhat have a beta. So if words are a bit jumbled I will go back and fix things 100% once the story is complete! Thank you for your support!

Chapter 2 is live now! 

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Am I writing a Titanic Javey fic you ask? YOU BET YOUR SWEET ASS I AM.

Here you are! The first chapter of You Jump, I Jump is live on AO3! 

Let me know your thoughts about the story! I live for feed back as it helps me become a better writer! Also side note, I somewhat have a beta. So if words are a bit jumbled I will go back and fix things 100% once the story is complete! Thank you for your support!

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