Dearest peaky friends! Still rewriting mystical child. 1/5 of the way through ! <3 more active on @frankensteinslesbian
Are people still interested in peaky? Cooking up a new fic <3
Big cleaning / decluttering list
If you get tired that’s okay!
The thing I'm most afraid of is me. Of not knowing what I'm going to do. Of not knowing what I'm doing right now.
-Haruki Murakami
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1. Pacing
A fight scene should be fast-paced and intense. Unless it's a final battle with numerous parties, a fight scene that's too long tends to take away suspense. To speed up your pacing, use active voice to describe movement and don't overdescribe your characters' thoughts. Excessive inner monologue will be unrealistic, as people usually have no room to think during intense combats.
2. Character mannerisms
Here's a point that people often overlook, but is actually super important. Through fight scenes, you should be able to reveal your characters' contrasting mannerisms and personality. A cunning character would play dirty - fighting less and making use of their opponent's weakness more. A violent character would aim to kill. A softer one would only target to disarm their enemies, using weakened attacks. A short-minded character would only rely on force and attack without thinking. This will help readers understand your characters more and decide who to root for.
3. Making use of surroundings
Not only the characters, you also need to consider the setting of your fight scene and use it to your advantage. Is it suitable for fighting, or are there dangerous slopes that make it risky? Are there scattered items that can help your characters fight (e.g. nails, shards of glass, ropes, wooden boards, or cutlery)? Is it a public place where people can easily spot the fight and call the authorities, or is it a private spot where they can fight to the death?
4. Description
The main things that you need to describe in a fight scene are :
• Characters involved in the fight
• How they initiate and dodge attacks
• Fighting styles and any weapons used
• The injuries caused
Be careful to not drag out the description for too long, because it slows down the pace.
5. Raise the stakes
By raising the stakes of the fight, your readers will be more invested in it. Just when they think it's over, introduce another worse conflict that will keep the scene going. Think of your characters' goals and motivations as well. Maybe if the MC didn't win, the world would end! Or maybe, one person in the fight is going all-out, while the other is going easy because they used to be close :"D
6. Injuries
Fights are bound to be dirty and resulting in injuries, so don't let your character walk away unscathed - show the effect of their injuries. For example, someone who had been punched in the jaw has a good chance of passing out, and someone who had been stabbed won't just remove the knife and walk away without any problem. To portray realistic injuries, research well.
7. Drive the plot forward
You don't write fight scenes only to make your characters look cool - every fight needs to have a purpose and drive the plot forward. Maybe they have to fight to improve their fighting skills or escape from somewhere alive. Maybe they need to defeat the enemy in order to obtain an object or retrieve someone who had been kidnapped. The point is, every single fight scene should bring the characters one step closer (or further :D) to the climax.
8. Words to use
• Hand to hand combat :
Crush, smash, lunge, beat, punch, leap, slap, scratch, batter, pummel, whack, slam, dodge, clobber, box, shove, bruise, knock, flick, push, choke, charge, impact
• With weapon :
Swing, slice, brandish, stab, shoot, whip, parry, cut, bump, poke, drive, shock, strap, pelt, plunge, impale, lash, bleed, sting, penetrate
Fiction Writing Advice Posts
Hey all, Some of you know that in addition to this Tumblr blog I also keep a blog on my website. A lot of the posts overlap, but not all of them, so I’ve made this list for your reading pleasure:
- How to Control Your Pacing
- How to Write During a Pandemic
- How to Read Like a Writer
- What if Your First Draft DOESN’T Suck?
- How to Do World-Building Research
- How to Properly Format a Manuscript for Submission
- 10 Questions to Ask an Editor Before Hiring Them
- Creating Character Arcs with the DCAST Method
- How to Choose the Right Point of View for Your Story
- A Beginner’s Guide to Multiple Point of View
- Show Don’t Tell? Not Always. Here’s When to Use Summary
- 8 Ways to Improve Your Fiction Writing
- How to Spot Bad Writing Advice: 6 Red Flags to Look For
- 5 Reasons to Kill Your Critique Group
- Are You Using Too Much Stage Direction?
- Why Nobody Cares About Your Plot
- How to Use Adverbs Like a Pro
- How to Activate Your Passive Characters, One Verb at a Time
- 3 Easy Ways to Transform Boring Descriptions
- 3 Ways to Increase Conflict in Your Dialogue
- A Step-by-Step Guide to Getting Killer Feedback from Beta Readers
- How to Know What Kind of Editing You Need
- 10 Best Books About Fiction Writing
- How to Spot an Info Dump
- Dealing With Procrastination
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An Overview of Note-Taking Styles
Note-taking is one of the most essential skills a student should master. It allows you to record and review information to be used in the future. But what’s the best way to do so? Here’s an overview of note-taking styles that can help you maximize your learning!
‘eat the frog' method
Hi all, it’s werelivingarts. I just stumbled across this method called ‘eat the frog’, which means you get the most difficult or important task out of your way first. I actually have been using this method for a long time, hope this post gives you a new way of managing your time and productivity! 😜
“If it’s your job to eat a frog, it’s best to do it first thing in the morning. And if it’s your job to eat two frogs, it’s best to eat the biggest one first.” – Mark Twain
The Garden: A Legacy Challenge
By: @cowplant-pizza
Hi guys, and welcome to my first ever Legacy Challenge! I spent an hour or so writing this up quickly because I was feeling creative! I hope this challenge might seem fun to some of you, fun enough to pick it up and play it! Please tag me if you’re starting it, and use the tag #garden legacy if you post pics! So, without further delay, here we go!
The Garden Legacy Challenge is a challenge carried out across 10 generations of your Sims family of choice. This introduction to the challenge can only be used as a guideline if you wish, as I’d love for you to express your creativity by using this as a template. Please, sit back, relax and enjoy playing the game! :)
Rules:
- Money Cheats are NOT allowed
- Aesthetic CC and poses are FINE
- Needs must be on decay AT ALL TIMES
- Feel free to pause ageing ONLY FOR STORY PURPOSES
- Your Sims must live on the SAME LOT for the whole 10 generations. A larger lot is recommended
- Any world is fine
- You may edit what your Sims look like in CAS if they fugly
Information:
Your entire 10 generations will be named after various plants you could find or have in your garden. This is inspired by the fact that your Sims will have a love for nature throughout all 10 generations, living their life on the family farm. Each generation also has a berry colour in case berry simmers would like to enjoy the challenge too!
Generation 1: ROSE
Traits: Ambitious, Loves the Outdoors, Vegetarian
Aspiration: Freelance Botanist
Berry Colour: Red
Information: This is the founder of your legacy! From living their entire childhood in the smelly and loud city, they have decided to begin a new lifestyle in the countryside. They dream of running a farm to support the generations to come.
Rules:
- Compete the Aspiration
- Have at least 2 children
- Have 1 dog and 1 cat
- Collect every base game plant
- Have no job: earn your money through gardening
- Care for at least 2 cowplants throughout your life
- Reach level 10 of the gardening skill
- Reach at least level 5 in: cooking, parenting and handiness
Generation 2: DAISY
Traits: Outgoing, Good, Self Assured
Aspiration: Friend of the World
Berry Colour: White with Yellow accents
Information: You grew up in a loving household, making you a friendly and nurturing Sim who wants nothing else than to help others.
Rules:
- Complete the Aspiration
- Reach at least level 7 in the politics career. Either Branch. Cause: Speak for the Trees
- Marry your first friend
- Have 4 children
- Reach level 10 charisma
- Reach level 10 gardening
Generation 3: BLUEBELL
Traits: Family Oriented, Romantic, Neat
Aspiration: Big Happy Family
Berry Colour: Blue
Information: You grew up surrounded by siblings. It was the best childhood you could have imagined. You want to bless your children with that same childhood!
Rules:
- Complete the Aspiration
- Reach level 10 parenting
- Maintain perfect friendship levels with your siblings
- Fill your household with children (you can have at least 1 pet)
- Reach level 5 in 2 different jobs
- Take the kids out on a day trip every Saturday
Generation 4: SUNFLOWER
Traits: Self Assured, Goofball, Childish
Aspiration: Joke Star
Berry Colour: Yellow
Information: You were always the class clown, getting in trouble all the time. You pulled endless amounts of pranks on your siblings and parents. You never want to grow up.
Rules:
- Complete the Aspiration
- Reach level 10 in the Entertainment Career: Comedian Branch
- Reach level 10 comdey
- Reach at least level 7: charisma and mischief
- Run a club called the Pranksters
- Use a Voodoo Doll on your spouse at least 10 times
- Marry a musician
Generation 5: Magnolia
Traits: Music Lover, Loner, Clumsy
Aspiration: Musical Genius
Berry Colour: White with Baby Pink accents
Information: Your parents were born entertainers, they lived to be on the stage. you share their talents but you are very shy and reserved. However, you still dream of being a well known and respected musician.
Rules:
- Complete the Aspiration
- Reach level 10 in the Entertainment Career: Musician Branch
- Reach level 10: piano and singing
- Reach level 7: guitar and violin
- Have only 1 friend outside of your family
- Marry that friend
- Have 2 children: Twins (you can use cheats for this)
Generation 6: PINE
Traits: Jealous, Non Committal, Gloomy
Aspiration: Renaissance Sim
Berry Colour: Green
Information: You always felt like your were second best to your twin (whether this is true or not is up to you). You often spent time burring your head in books, learning lots of different things, but never mastering them.
Rules:
- Complete the Aspiration
- Write a Book
- Paint 1 Masterpiece
- Write a Song
- Change jobs once you get to level 4
- Have at least 3 jobs
- You never retire
- You never marry
- You have 3 different children from one night stands
- A relationship is allowed after the children are born
Generation 7: TULIP
Traits: Lazy, Squeamish, Slob
Aspiration: Computer Whiz
Berry Colour: Grape Purple
Information: You grew up confused and conflicted about your parent’s relationship. This made you a troubled child who had to visit many therapists and doctors. You found comfort in video games and rely on the throughout your life.
Rules:
- Complete the Aspiration
- Reach level 10 in the Gaming Profession
- Marry someone you meet at Gamescon
- Naturally progress into the overweight section
- Reach skill level 10: video games and programming
- Have 2 children
Generation 8: PICCOLONI
Traits: Genius, Neat, Snob
Aspiration: Successful Lineage
Berry Colour: Hot Pink OR Orange
Information: After watching your parent struggle with health problems due to being overweight, you vowed to keep yourself and your own children healthy.
Rules:
- Complete the Aspiration
- Reach level 10 in the Doctors career
- Reach level 10 in: fitness and cooking
- Marry a fellow Dr
- Have 3 children
- Do not feed the children unhealthy food or snacks
Generation 9: SNAPDRAGON
Traits: Foodie, Athletic, Insider
Aspiration: Bodybuilder
Berry Colour: Light Pink OR Peach
Information: You grew up being pushed to your limits and you loved every second of it. You love exercise and cooking and want to make your two hobbies work well together. You enjoy using fresh food found on your families farm.
Rules:
- Complete the Aspiration
- Reach level 10 in the Athletic Career
- Reach level 5 in the Cooking Career
- Reach level 10: fitness, cooking and baking
- Reach level 5: gourmet cooking
- Marry another Foodie
- Have triplets (once again, cheats are allowed for this)
Generation 10: HYDRANGER
Traits: Materialistic, Hot Headed, Perfectionist
Aspiration: Fabulously Wealthy
Berry Colour: Light Blue
Information: You finally decide that your family is worth more than living on a farm forever. It’s time for your legacy to move on. You want to move out into a penthouse in the city and create an exciting future for generations to come.
Rules:
- Complete the Aspiration
- Marry someone wealthy and living in the City
- Reach level 10 in the Business Career
- Reach level 10 in 3 skills of your choice
- Throw a party every weekend
The generation (and challenge!) finished once you have completed the rules to generation 10! It’s up to you if you continue by moving your Sim to San Myshuno or stop there! I hope you have enjoyed playing my challenge and share this with your friends :)
spring cleaning!!! unfollow me if youre a terf, homophobic, biphobic, islamophobic, dont agree w the black lives matter movement
also unfollow if your’e an antisemite, and just racist in general
Also unfollow me if you call asexual people “cishets,” bisexual people dating someone of a different gender “bihets,” or nonbinary people or trans people who don’t have dysphoria “transtrenders.” Bye
terfs, swerfs, truscums and transmeds are absolutely not welcomed here as well thanks.
“GENDER CRITICAL” PEOPLE ALSO. YALL ARE JUST TERFS.
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Black people do not have to be exceptional for their right to life!!!!
Repeat after me:
Black people do not have to be exceptional for their right to life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This hardly has any notes but can I just say that non black people and white people you can in fact reblog this, thanks x
I’d encourage non black people and white people to reblog this so we at least know ya’ll understand and that we’re on the same page.Thanks.
“george floyd wasn’t a saint!” perhaps he wasn’t, bitch!!! he still did not deserve to die!!!!
I present to you a drama, comedy, horror. This story killed me three times.
Please go watch Sex Explained on Netflix. Not only is it a great resource for the basic sex education that is sorely lacking in the U.S., but some of ya’ll need to take a deep breath and remember the difference between fantasy vs reality. This purity culture thing that we’re going through right now is directly harmful to responsible, healthy sexual expression. BTW this woman, Lisa Diamond, is a noted psychologist and has been pushing for greater understanding of womens sexuality as a whole.
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something doesn’t sit right with me with the way the world has been quiet towards the genocide currently taking place in china. there are over millions of muslims that are being raped, tortured, and forced to eat pork simply because they are muslims. i’ve talked about this so many times in the past year yet it is continuously brushed down. their ultimate goal is to denounce islam from every single muslim there. you know what i do see on my social media feed right now? i see constant praise towards the street fashion in china. there’s nothing wrong with that but how can you support and praise the good aspects of a country and ignore the bad that is taking place there, that they are tacticfully hiding from the rest of the world? should we wait to care when it’s written in a history book? this breaks my heart as a muslim. they don’t get to practice their religion peacefully because of the geographical location they are in. it’s not fair. this isn’t a ‘muslim’ issue this is a HUMAN issue. the entire world mourned the loss of a burning cathedral in france. but while a genocide is occurring, with intentions to wipe an entire group of people, the world has turned a blind eye. simply because muslims are not worthy enough to fight for? if you care here’s a link to a petition. please spread the message and don’t turn a blind eye to this. i’ve attached some important resource links below for those interested in learning the entirety of what’s happening.
snape deciding to teach children at a school:
Map of European rulers in January, 1930.