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Looking for betas for original fantasy book

I've been writing an original fantasy book (Soulborn) for about two years now, and I've had friends beta it, but I'd like to have someone that I don't know beta'ing it as well.

Pitch:

"Rune is a soulborn, a person blessed with power by the High God Kýn, and lives in the northern country Erissúr as a jarl’s son. His only struggle is figuring out why he has been cursed with ice instead of blessed with the power of fire. But his world changes drastically when the Opronich Empire invades Erissúr and transforms Rune’s life in a split second. Now, living in a country that is no longer the nation he once knew, Rune’s only goal is to keep his family safe and his soul hidden. That is until an Erissúrian princess reappears in need of help finding her family, and with the message of a rebellion still brewing."

Fans of series such as Percy Jackson, Loki and Arcane will be interested in Rune’s character building and the large-scale worldbuilding that will evolve through the course of The Saga series, with an ever diversing cast of color, culture and romantic orientations that mirrors our own world. I have received positive feedback on the complexity of my characters, from my friends, as well as on the descriptive language that brings the world to mind, in such a capacity that it feels like the reader is there themselves. In addition, this is planned out as a series of at least seven books, of which the next four have the working titles: Prophecy, Rebellion, Water, and Vessel.

I'm thinking 1-3 betas would be great!

Anyone interested in helping out?

Please share!

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Looking for betas for original fantasy book

I've been writing an original fantasy book (Soulborn) for about two years now, and I've had friends beta it, but I'd like to have someone that I don't know beta'ing it as well.

Pitch:

"Rune is a soulborn, a person blessed with power by the High God Kýn, and lives in the northern country Erissúr as a jarl’s son. His only struggle is figuring out why he has been cursed with ice instead of blessed with the power of fire. But his world changes drastically when the Opronich Empire invades Erissúr and transforms Rune’s life in a split second. Now, living in a country that is no longer the nation he once knew, Rune’s only goal is to keep his family safe and his soul hidden. That is until an Erissúrian princess reappears in need of help finding her family, and with the message of a rebellion still brewing."

Fans of series such as Percy Jackson, Loki and Arcane will be interested in Rune’s character building and the large-scale worldbuilding that will evolve through the course of The Saga series, with an ever diversing cast of color, culture and romantic orientations that mirrors our own world. I have received positive feedback on the complexity of my characters, from my friends, as well as on the descriptive language that brings the world to mind, in such a capacity that it feels like the reader is there themselves. In addition, this is planned out as a series of at least seven books, of which the next four have the working titles: Prophecy, Rebellion, Water, and Vessel.

I'm thinking 1-3 betas would be great!

Anyone interested in helping out?

Please share!

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Looking for betas for original fantasy book

I've been writing an original fantasy book (Soulborn) for about two years now, and I've had friends beta it, but I'd like to have someone that I don't know beta'ing it as well.

Pitch:

"Rune is a soulborn, a person blessed with power by the High God Kýn, and lives in the northern country Erissúr as a jarl’s son. His only struggle is figuring out why he has been cursed with ice instead of blessed with the power of fire. But his world changes drastically when the Opronich Empire invades Erissúr and transforms Rune’s life in a split second. Now, living in a country that is no longer the nation he once knew, Rune’s only goal is to keep his family safe and his soul hidden. That is until an Erissúrian princess reappears in need of help finding her family, and with the message of a rebellion still brewing."

Fans of series such as Percy Jackson, Loki and Arcane will be interested in Rune’s character building and the large-scale worldbuilding that will evolve through the course of The Saga series, with an ever diversing cast of color, culture and romantic orientations that mirrors our own world. I have received positive feedback on the complexity of my characters, from my friends, as well as on the descriptive language that brings the world to mind, in such a capacity that it feels like the reader is there themselves. In addition, this is planned out as a series of at least seven books, of which the next four have the working titles: Prophecy, Rebellion, Water, and Vessel.

I'm thinking 1-3 betas would be great!

Anyone interested in helping out?

Please share!

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So I know the canon depiction of the 7 rings of hell in the helluverse is just,,, 7 flat disks layered on top of eachother.

But before I found that out I was picture ringworlds.

Ring worlds in scifi are one giant ring that obits a sun, and either artificial gravity or the centrifical force keeps the people stuck to the inside of the ring, and there's artificial pannels obiting in between the ring and the sun to create a day-night cycle.

And it would be cool enough on its own if each ring worked like that, with their own sun and everything.

But then I kept imagining there's SEVEN rings, and what if they had to share as sun? What if they orbited eachother???

Now it'd be cool, too, if the rings were different sized, and orbited a single sun from biggest to smallest, probably on different,,, axises? I'm not a scientist. lol, sorry.

But you get what I mean - they'd be constantly blocking the sun from each other, with the rings all different sizes and with a different number of rings in between each one and the sun. They would get diffrent amounts of sunlight, with the center ring, the smallest, either having its own panels lined up between it and the sun, getting the most regulated and consistent day-night cycle which I think would work for Pride, as all the sinners come from Earth where it's just Like That, and Lucifer being King might want his ring with the most consistency, or it get CONSTANT sun, which I think would work for how the Wrath ring is shown in Helluva Boss.

And then the outer ring might get almost no sunlight dispite it's size, which I think would work for Envy, which is a watery place in canon I think? Would get them a frozen over top layer of the ocean where they COULD walk around if they could get up there.

And while I've kinda talked myself into that, I'm still obsessed with the idea they're evenly interwoven with each other like a magic flow bracelet.

For a day and night/season cycle, they'd all orbit the sun and eachother evenly so they'd all be getting the same light as eachother at all times, and move farther or closer to the sun as they flared out and colapsed again

And travel wise you could maybe only travel from transport stations in the center when they're all closest, and some times there all almost completely over lapping so you could move from one to the other from almost anywhere a transport station exists.

(God playing with hell)

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Lucifer: *enters the hotel*

Alastor: I cast vicious mockery 😈

An animation my sis and I made for fun

Music is Perception Check by Tom Cardy.

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Anonymous asked:

For the "appleradio fake screenshot" suggestions: Lucifer protecting/szving Alastor from Adam? Or Luci carrying Al like a Princess while flying? Please? 👀

your wish is my command uvu

had to make it biblically accurate to the characters 🤌 i shan’t have it any other way

thanks for the prompt!!

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Visiting your enemy's tower to drink a little bit AhAHa

Weird way to start a truce but okay

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Okay people have been talking about this but I wanna talk about it too because my heart is in a vice grip over it

The fact that Lucifer looks so vacant when the angels’ spears are on him. He looks so…dead and accepting. Like he doesn’t care what they do to him.

But then when the spears suddenly turn to Charlie…

He is horrified. He is so so scared of losing her, of anything bad or even lethal happening to her. He looks like he’s looking upon his worst nightmare seeing heaven threaten his little girl

(In other words, eat it Lute, he does care.)

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