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jupiter ; they/she/it
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The Touwa Children

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Word Count: 1,625
TW: Mentioned parental death (if i missed anything, let me know and i’ll tag it!)

Ishimaru Kiyotaka was a banker in the banking district of the city. He was someone the Touwa children vaguely knew because he was an acquaintance of their parents. He was also someone they were not expecting to see on a dismal day like today, much less on a beach as grey and lifeless as the one they currently stood on.

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Phantoms

Hey guys, long time no write!
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Word Count: 1,492
TW: Mentions of Hospitals and Past Injuries (if i missed any, let me know and i’ll add them!)
NOTE: I am neither a prosthesis user nor an amputee, so if something I wrote here is offensive or harmful, please let me know! My intention was not to write something harmful, so I would love to learn what my potential mistakes are so I can fix them.

Normally, Kaede wouldn’t ever think to enter her friend’s talent lab without their permission, but, well, nobody had seen Chabashira in a while, and as the class representative, she had a responsibility to ensure her classmates were okay. So, cautiously, because she isn’t sure if Chabashira is in the middle of practicing their neo-aikido or not, Kaede cracks open the door to their lab. Except, rather than finding them practicing, they’re laying on their back on the tatami mats, and their arm is laying next to them. For a brief and horrifying second, Kaede forgets Chabashira has a prosthesis and is more than prepared to run and find Tsumiki.

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Resources For Writing Deaf, Mute, or Blind Characters

Despite the fact that I am not deaf, mute, or blind myself, one of the most common questions I receive is how to portray characters with these disabilities in fiction.

As such, I’ve compiled the resources I’ve accumulated (from real life deaf, mute, or blind people) into a handy masterlist.

Deaf Characters:

Dialogue with signing characters (also applies to mute characters.)

Mute Characters

Blind Characters:

Characters Who Are Blind in One Eye

Deaf-Blind Characters

If you have any more resources to add, let me know!  I’ll be adding to this post as I find more resources.

I hope this helps, and happy writing!  <3

Updated with more resources, specifically for characters who are blind in one eye.

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What's going on with Ao3?

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essentially, in their tos, ao3 does not ban real person porn, even if that porn is written about a minor. as i myself am a minor, i find this intensely uncomfortable and won’t be using the platform much, if at all, until further notice

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Writing advice from my uni teachers:

  • If your dialog feels flat, rewrite the scene pretending the characters cannot at any cost say exactly what they mean. No one says “I’m mad” but they can say it in 100 other ways.
  • Wrote a chapter but you dislike it? Rewrite it again from memory. That way you’re only remembering the main parts and can fill in extra details. My teacher who was a playwright literally writes every single script twice because of this.
  • Don’t overuse metaphors, or they lose their potency. Limit yourself.
  • Before you write your novel, write a page of anything from your characters POV so you can get their voice right. Do this for every main character introduced.
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gyarados

You’re welcome

This is the most useful thing I’ve ever reblogged.

i used to think when people said my cousin twice removed that their cousin must’ve did some fucked up shit to get kicked out of the family twice

Oh so THAT’S what “twice removed” means… 

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When you are writing a story and refer to a character by a physical trait, occupation, age, or any other attribute, rather than that character’s name, you are bringing the reader’s attention to that particular attribute. That can be used quite effectively to help your reader to focus on key details with just a few words. However, if the fact that the character is “the blond,” “the magician,” “the older woman,” etc. is not relevant to that moment in the story, this will only distract the reader from the purpose of the scene. 

If your only reason for referring to a character this way is to avoid using his or her name or a pronoun too much, don’t do it. You’re fixing a problem that actually isn’t one. Just go ahead and use the name or pronoun again. It’ll be good.

Someone finally spelled out the REASON for using epithets, and the reasons NOT to.

In addition to that:

If the character you are referring to in such a way is THE VIEWPOINT CHARACTER, likewise, don’t do it. I.e. if you’re writing in third person but the narration is through their eyes, or what is also called “third person deep POV”. If the narration is filtered through the character’s perception, then a very external, impersonal description will be jarring. It’s the same, and just as bad, as writing “My bright blue eyes returned his gaze” in first person.

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Furthermore, 

if the story is actually told through the eyes of one particular viewpoint character even though it’s in the third person, and in their voice, as is very often the case, then you shouldn’t refer to the characters in ways that character wouldn’t.

In other words, if the third-person narrator is Harry Potter, when Dumbledore appears, it says “Dumbledore appears”, not “Albus appears”. Bucky Barnes would think of Steve Rogers as “Steve”, where another character might think of him as “Cap”. Chekov might think of Kirk as “the captain”, but Bones thinks of him as “Jim”. 

Now, there are real situations where you, I, or anybody might think of another person as “the other man”, “the taller man”, or “the doctor”: usually when you don’t know their names, like when there are two tap-dancers and a ballerina in a routine and one of the men lifts the ballerina and then she reaches out and grabs the other man’s hand; or when there was a group of people talking at the hospital and they all worked there, but the doctor was the one who told them what to do. These are all perfectly natural and normal. Similarly, sometimes I think of my GP as “the doctor” even though I know her name, or one of my coworkers as “the taller man” even though I know his. But I definitely never think of my long-term life partner as “the green-eyed woman” or one of my best friends as “the taller person” or anything like that. It’s not a sensible adjective for your brain to choose in that situation - it’s too impersonal for someone you’re so intimately acquainted with. Also, even if someone was having a one night stand or a drunken hookup with a stranger, they probably wouldn’t think of that person as “the other man”: you only think of ‘other’ when you’re distinguishing two things and you don’t have to go to any special effort to distinguish your partner from yourself to yourself.

This is something that I pretty consistently have to advise for those I beta edit.  (It doesn’t help that I relied on epithets a lot in the earlier sections of my main fic because I was getting into the swing of things.)  I am reblogging this so fanfic writers can use this as a reference.

A good rule of thumb: a character’s familiarity with another character decreases the need for an epithet (and most times you really don’t need one at all).

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A New Place, a Temple

Written for Whumptober Day 30
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Word Count: 743
TW: Broken Bones, Arguing, Swearing (if i missed any, let me know and i’ll add them!)

The adrenaline making Dahlia’s heart beat loudly in her ears allows her to sprint down the sidewalk, watching Iris from the corner of her eye to make sure her sister doesn’t fall to the ground.

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Oh Dear Sister, Hold Me Close

Written for Whumptober Day 27
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Word Count: 501
TW: Storms, Power Outage (if i missed any, let me know and i’ll add them!)

The wind is howling and the rain is pouring and it’s currently so, so loud. But it’s fine, she’s fine, her loved ones are fine. The storm may be flooding the streets and trying to dredge up memories of her teenhood, but she’s inside, safe and warm, and Lana is too, so she’s okay. She’s fine.

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