Heyy!! I love your writing and your blog! I don’t want to be annoying or come off as a know it all or something but I am always grateful when people give me tips on how to improve my writing and so I thought maybe you would like that too. And you don’t have to take the advice I just want to be helpful, and of course I don’t know if you’re aware of that and already improving but yeah. So I noticed that you often switch the narrator like mid work and then switch back again, like going from first person narrator to to second person. Just thought I’d let you know or sum, but this is really no criticism this is meant as friendly advice cause yk, I struggle with the narrator too and wished someone told me earlier cuz I didn’t notice it. Anyways your work is phenomenal and I love all of it 😘 have a nice day ❤️