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Sterling|She/Her|Aries|Writing blog: @/caffeine-bee |Ask box open!
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caffeine-bee

Hello! I'm Bee/Sterling and I am new to the writblr community. I hope to make a lot of friends here and while I'm quite shy I want to eventually participate in tag games. My stories are primarily character-driven and have some flavor of fantasy and adventure. Please note: This is a side blog! I don't actually post anything on my main blog anymore.

A little more about me

  • Illustrator/ Graphic Designer by trade which means I likely will post character illustrations
  • She/Her | Ace
  • Fave Tropes/Genres: Found Family, Hurt/Comfort, Angst, Squad goals(platonic relationships!), Moral ambiguity, fantasy, and dystopian, enemies/friends-> lovers, badass turned parent, LGBTQ+ rep
  • Recovering from Squirrel/Shiny Thing Syndrome
  • As you probably noticed from my tropes, I have a background in writing fanfiction!
  • My favorite part of writing is world-building, I will world-build for hours

What the blog is about

You may have noticed I am recovering from Shiny Thing Syndrome and as a result, once I get past the world-building phase I just... don't (tm). I am hoping to use this blog to introduce my characters and document my struggles and triumphs as a writer. (My current and shelved WIPS are below the cut)

For those of you who follow me here, I am not active here anymore! (Apart from a few random writing things and memes) This is my writing blog where I am now the most active. Stop on by, I have cookies and I'll be introducing some characters soon

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Is French fanfic more like written or spoken French?

Anyone know to what extent French fanfic uses the passé simple? My informal impression is that English fanfic tends to use present tense and second person at slightly higher rates than published English fiction, but that overall there is a considerable overlap. But since fanfic writers face fewer barriers to entry than published writers, perhaps not everyone who writes fanfic is comfortable with the passé simple. On the other hand, since writers are often also readers, maybe they are. Or maybe there’s some sort of progression as people develop as writers.

I honestly have no idea, but I have a feeling that tumblr is the right place to be asking this question. Anyone?

This is amusing because I was going to say that not confusing second-language learners of French with passé simple actually sounds very sensible, rather than making them believe they should use it in common conversation, but I understand your frustration x’) I got into a lot of small arguments with my English teachers at school because they would say “this form/phrase is never correct, use this instead” and I’d immediately think of exceptional examples I’d read… in English fanfic.

And about fanfic, that is indeed an interesting question. I remember when I started out writing fic, I used passé simple but still wrote as simply and closely to SF as possible — skipping subjunctives or using the easiest tenses as often as possible and even using passé composé regularly. I’m sure a lot of it was technically grammatically incorrect, but I was praised for my writing and my good grasp of my grammar (especially for my age). I think this was and still is the general trend; you do sometimes encounter the odd perfectly grammatically correct fic in passé simple with perfect concordance des temps, subjonctif imparfait, etc, but this seems weirdly jarring if the fic’s topic or tone isn’t especially serious.

I remember that I did eventually start writing French fic in present tense without really thinking about it, though probably because I’d been reading English fics that did it — and this caused lots of immediate reactions in the French fandom, from “Wow, that was surprising, but interesting choice! It gives a feeling of realness and instantaneousness! Very creative, I might start doing it too!” to “This would be a good fic if it weren’t in present tense. That’s just plain wrong. Change it to passé simple, that’s the rule”. (I was very surprised ‘cause it hadn’t even occurred to me that I was doing anything unusual, it was just a lot easier and more natural to write…)

That was around ten years ago though. These days, from what I’ve seen, I think more and more of French fanfic has absorbed the English trend of using present tense and second person as well (I think it was at first seasoned writers deliberately experimenting with something new, and now there are also young newbie writers who simply don’t know/think about “the rules” and feel free to do whatever as well); but it’s more noticeable/noticed, since there’s such a strong tradition tightly linking fiction and passé simple. You do run into the occasional grammar nazis who try to bring the rules of the Académie Française to the creative fanspace, though.

This is just my experience of French fandom; I’ve been more into English space for the last few years though, so there may be people with a totally different experience! There’s definitely something interesting going on there, though, and I think it might be relevant to note that many French fanficcers read a lot in English, but write in French, and might “bring” English fandom trends as well as linguistics characteristics to French fanspace. (The Harry Potter did some fun things back in the days…)

I remember reading some French novels that used the present tense ~10 years ago, back when I was regularly reading French novels, and at least one was a translation of an English work that had been written in the past tense, so it’s not necessarily a new/Englishy thing. 

Anyway, since I posted the question I’ve been sent a link to all 5000+ fics on AO3 in the French language category (thanks, destinationtoast!). I am obviously not going to check them all manually (although if anyone wants to write a script that would compare each of them against a list of words in the passé simple, that would be really cool). But I did check the first 10 and last 10 fics in the list (I’m not sure what criteria they’re listed by, but whatever it is I didn’t want it to bias my sample).

At any rate, 14/20 fics used the passé simple, 5/20 used the present, and 1/20 used the passé composé, and there was no discernible effect of list position. Of course, they all used the imparfait, and I didn’t check for the past subjunctive or how accurately they used the particular verb forms. 

So it definitely looks like the passé simple is very much alive in French fanfic, at least on AO3! 

Thank you so much for those stats! I thought I had forgotten more French than I actually did :') and this makes me feel far less discouraged when it comes to working on my reading. (We were never taught passé simple when I first learned the language, and it's really coming back to bite me)

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I think the funniest thing I've learned while studying French again is that it's always flaunted as a romantic language, but there's really not... a lot of what as an English speaker would call romantic words. Like the word for "hug" is a phrase (serrer dans ses bras). There really isn't a word to describe "comfort xyz thing". But boy, do I know how to insult someone.

It's just really interesting and kinda cool.

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Rented a book from the library, it looks scary, I'm gonna read it

Well not great but also not as bad at the last one I looked at. The author mixed up character names for that one, it was so bad it was actually kinda funny.

This one just has content warnings in it... which I love! Legitimately! But it’s so new right now in print books, and unfortunately, every single book I picked up that has had cw in the front has been so absolutely horrible to read. Like not content wise, content wise, the idea is solid. I mean structurally. I've unfortunately come to associate it with poorly written books just as I've come to associate adult fiction with a really played out trope that's just exhausting to read.

Regardless, I always give the benefit of the doubt and hope that it proves me wrong. Though, I am irritated that it did give me a spoiler. It's a thriller/horror I'm going to expect certain tropes that's what a thriller/horror is. You can't ruin the suspense for me by telling me what's going to happen, it defeats the purpose akfkdkvjdkvk

Help, it's going in the direction I'm scared of: great premise, bad execution. Like not terrible and can redeem itself (beginnings are hard) but it took me out of it just as it was getting good.

:|

Like it's not bad, it's not great, it's just... meh

Characters are great, concept and execution is... eh

Okay, maybe because I lived in a haunted city for 4 years and I'm a tough audience, but this... feels like a ghost tour story...

Like girl, he was being professional and polite! It's a tiny inn in a tiny town! Teeny tiny town!

Page 40 and I am stopping here. It kept taking me out of the suspense. It was supposed to be scary! >:(

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Rented a book from the library, it looks scary, I'm gonna read it

Well not great but also not as bad at the last one I looked at. The author mixed up character names for that one, it was so bad it was actually kinda funny.

This one just has content warnings in it... which I love! Legitimately! But it’s so new right now in print books, and unfortunately, every single book I picked up that has had cw in the front has been so absolutely horrible to read. Like not content wise, content wise, the idea is solid. I mean structurally. I've unfortunately come to associate it with poorly written books just as I've come to associate adult fiction with a really played out trope that's just exhausting to read.

Regardless, I always give the benefit of the doubt and hope that it proves me wrong. Though, I am irritated that it did give me a spoiler. It's a thriller/horror I'm going to expect certain tropes that's what a thriller/horror is. You can't ruin the suspense for me by telling me what's going to happen, it defeats the purpose akfkdkvjdkvk

Help, it's going in the direction I'm scared of: great premise, bad execution. Like not terrible and can redeem itself (beginnings are hard) but it took me out of it just as it was getting good.

:|

Like it's not bad, it's not great, it's just... meh

Characters are great, concept and execution is... eh

Okay, maybe because I lived in a haunted city for 4 years and I'm a tough audience, but this... feels like a ghost tour story...

Like girl, he was being professional and polite! It's a tiny inn in a tiny town! Teeny tiny town!

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reblogged

Rented a book from the library, it looks scary, I'm gonna read it

Well not great but also not as bad at the last one I looked at. The author mixed up character names for that one, it was so bad it was actually kinda funny.

This one just has content warnings in it... which I love! Legitimately! But it’s so new right now in print books, and unfortunately, every single book I picked up that has had cw in the front has been so absolutely horrible to read. Like not content wise, content wise, the idea is solid. I mean structurally. I've unfortunately come to associate it with poorly written books just as I've come to associate adult fiction with a really played out trope that's just exhausting to read.

Regardless, I always give the benefit of the doubt and hope that it proves me wrong. Though, I am irritated that it did give me a spoiler. It's a thriller/horror I'm going to expect certain tropes that's what a thriller/horror is. You can't ruin the suspense for me by telling me what's going to happen, it defeats the purpose akfkdkvjdkvk

Help, it's going in the direction I'm scared of: great premise, bad execution. Like not terrible and can redeem itself (beginnings are hard) but it took me out of it just as it was getting good.

:|

Like it's not bad, it's not great, it's just... meh

Characters are great, concept and execution is... eh

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reblogged

Rented a book from the library, it looks scary, I'm gonna read it

Well not great but also not as bad at the last one I looked at. The author mixed up character names for that one, it was so bad it was actually kinda funny.

This one just has content warnings in it... which I love! Legitimately! But it’s so new right now in print books, and unfortunately, every single book I picked up that has had cw in the front has been so absolutely horrible to read. Like not content wise, content wise, the idea is solid. I mean structurally. I've unfortunately come to associate it with poorly written books just as I've come to associate adult fiction with a really played out trope that's just exhausting to read.

Regardless, I always give the benefit of the doubt and hope that it proves me wrong. Though, I am irritated that it did give me a spoiler. It's a thriller/horror I'm going to expect certain tropes that's what a thriller/horror is. You can't ruin the suspense for me by telling me what's going to happen, it defeats the purpose akfkdkvjdkvk

Help, it's going in the direction I'm scared of: great premise, bad execution. Like not terrible and can redeem itself (beginnings are hard) but it took me out of it just as it was getting good.

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reblogged

Rented a book from the library, it looks scary, I'm gonna read it

Well not great but also not as bad at the last one I looked at. The author mixed up character names for that one, it was so bad it was actually kinda funny.

This one just has content warnings in it... which I love! Legitimately! But it’s so new right now in print books, and unfortunately, every single book I picked up that has had cw in the front has been so absolutely horrible to read. Like not content wise, content wise, the idea is solid. I mean structurally. I've unfortunately come to associate it with poorly written books just as I've come to associate adult fiction with a really played out trope that's just exhausting to read.

Regardless, I always give the benefit of the doubt and hope that it proves me wrong. Though, I am irritated that it did give me a spoiler. It's a thriller/horror I'm going to expect certain tropes that's what a thriller/horror is. You can't ruin the suspense for me by telling me what's going to happen, it defeats the purpose akfkdkvjdkvk

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I just....I just learned that there's a word in the English language...for when you run into someone to hug them with all the enthusiasm and strength you have....I learned that it's called glomp.

My God, English has so many words to describe physical intimacy, I'm in love

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jesterbots

genuinely one of the saddest parts of this new era of the internet is how hard it is to rick roll someone now. with people's attention spans shortening so much, they wouldn't even get through the first few bait seconds before clicking off the video. like i saw a comment that ended with "btw i made all of this up" and the replies kept treating it so seriously because none of them finished the entire 4 sentence comment. and We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I (do I) A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

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why does this have 32k notes? it’s just a picture of a knife in a ranch bottle, is there some unspoken joke that 32 thousand people share? what is going on here, i dont get it. it’s just a fucking picture of a knife in a ranch bottle. is there some spiritual connection people have to this picture? is there some ominous and mystical reasoning that this has 32 thousand notes? do people reblog this because it makes them look like some indie blogger? or is there just something funny to this? someone please explain

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diggly

no one tell him

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rhube

This is it, lads. The post that started us on this path 9 years ago.

I sure hope no one told him.

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Book Club Questions

So I have a captive audience for the first vol of MDZS in December and I was wondering what kind of discussion questions you guys think would be good to have for the first book.

I was thinking of addressing the non-linear plot-line and doing a few introductory questions regarding the genre as a whole. These are older folks who very well may never have read outside of American and British Literature so while I'm not trying to handhold them in any sense of the word I can't just expect them to understand the genre and its workings without pointing them along that direction to think about those things.

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