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That's Connor Rhodes, Our New Trauma Fellow

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JJ. 25. Multifandom. Writer of fanfic and Gif Maker. Connor Rhodes fangirl. Requests are open! Icon made by me. Who I Write For
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Soo there's something about Hank Voight & Jay Halstead realtionship that keep remember the same energy of Batman & Nightwing

Like Voight been there to him, like a proud father, even when Jay gets a Little stubborn, doing this in his own, but deep down there's this feeling of " That's my boy" inside Hank's head when they finish a hard case..

And Halstead, he may not agreed with Voight metods, but he will always choose The Sargent side of history.

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Writing advice from my uni teachers:

  • If your dialog feels flat, rewrite the scene pretending the characters cannot at any cost say exactly what they mean. No one says “I’m mad” but they can say it in 100 other ways.
  • Wrote a chapter but you dislike it? Rewrite it again from memory. That way you’re only remembering the main parts and can fill in extra details. My teacher who was a playwright literally writes every single script twice because of this.
  • Don’t overuse metaphors, or they lose their potency. Limit yourself.
  • Before you write your novel, write a page of anything from your characters POV so you can get their voice right. Do this for every main character introduced.
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This is legit good writing advice, especially the first bullet point! In playwriting class we did a bit where every bit of dialogue had to be an accusatory question and it was glorious.

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I've Got You Brother

Coming to an AO3 Screen to you soon.

Excerpt:

The move to Riyadh didn’t happen. After Connor got to Starling, after he saw it was true and how his brother was handling it, (Not well by the way. Not that anyone handled it well. But Tommy’s more destructive behavior was making an appearance while grief raged in him) Connor knew he couldn’t leave his twin brother alone. Couldn’t leave when Tommy just was struggling to get out of bed for the first week, after the funeral. So Connor once again donned the Merlyn last name. But not to be associated with Malcolm. But to be linked to his mother as he pulled on a connection to get an interview for a slot at the trauma residency at Starling General because someone dropped out.  “Connor Merlyn,” Janice Bowen welcomed him with a warm maternal smile and a tight hug that Connor returned. Dr. Bowen’s son may have been a prick but Connor had nothing but fond memories of the woman in front of him (Mainly of her keeping him and Tommy occupied when his mother was with a patient) So he returned the hug and forced a smile for her sake, even though a grimace threatened to make itself known at the mention of the Merlyn name.
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I've Got You Brother

Coming to an AO3 Screen to you soon.

Excerpt:

The move to Riyadh didn’t happen. After Connor got to Starling, after he saw it was true and how his brother was handling it, (Not well by the way. Not that anyone handled it well. But Tommy’s more destructive behavior was making an appearance while grief raged in him) Connor knew he couldn’t leave his twin brother alone. Couldn’t leave when Tommy just was struggling to get out of bed for the first week, after the funeral. So Connor once again donned the Merlyn last name. But not to be associated with Malcolm. But to be linked to his mother as he pulled on a connection to get an interview for a slot at the trauma residency at Starling General because someone dropped out.  “Connor Merlyn,” Janice Bowen welcomed him with a warm maternal smile and a tight hug that Connor returned. Dr. Bowen’s son may have been a prick but Connor had nothing but fond memories of the woman in front of him (Mainly of her keeping him and Tommy occupied when his mother was with a patient) So he returned the hug and forced a smile for her sake, even though a grimace threatened to make itself known at the mention of the Merlyn name.
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reblogged

I've Got You Brother

Coming to an AO3 Screen to you soon.

Excerpt:

The move to Riyadh didn’t happen. After Connor got to Starling, after he saw it was true and how his brother was handling it, (Not well by the way. Not that anyone handled it well. But Tommy’s more destructive behavior was making an appearance while grief raged in him) Connor knew he couldn’t leave his twin brother alone. Couldn’t leave when Tommy just was struggling to get out of bed for the first week, after the funeral. So Connor once again donned the Merlyn last name. But not to be associated with Malcolm. But to be linked to his mother as he pulled on a connection to get an interview for a slot at the trauma residency at Starling General because someone dropped out.  “Connor Merlyn,” Janice Bowen welcomed him with a warm maternal smile and a tight hug that Connor returned. Dr. Bowen’s son may have been a prick but Connor had nothing but fond memories of the woman in front of him (Mainly of her keeping him and Tommy occupied when his mother was with a patient) So he returned the hug and forced a smile for her sake, even though a grimace threatened to make itself known at the mention of the Merlyn name.
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