Chief Inspector???
When you start writing things, you only ever hear the words in your own voice. Eventually, you might persuade someone to read some of it for you, to get an idea of how it sounds. If you’re very lucky the people you persuade might be trained actors...
Long-term readers might recall me talking around Easter this year about a project being put together that was a load of short scripts, and I was one of the people writing for it. I was about two days off the deadline, and I had *nothing*. In sheer desperation I dug out of my laptop storage a written but nowhere near yet ready to be published bit of YACI! I scrapped the identifiers off (’Jack’ becomes ‘Johnny’, ‘Phryne’ becomes ‘Jules’, ‘Rosie’ becomes ‘Susie’), removed anything that wasn’t dialogue and threw it into the submission box.
It got picked up for the show, and has now been through two redrafts. Alas, a character has fallen by the wayside (but when this does eventually go up in fic it will be much more like the original version).
Tonight was the first rehearsal. Bear in mind that my actors don’t know where the story comes from, and only have a *very* brief Dramatis Personae and what’s in the script to go on. I’d set them research overnight, and asked them to consider some questions.
We worked on the background for some time. The stuff they came out with, based on the tiniest details in the written script, was amazing. ‘Johnny’ is, they reckon, a Chief Inspector, although that rank is a recent promotion; ‘Jules’, whose Dad owns half of Derbyshire (!) is the sort of person who has a lot of money, but there is nothing snobbish about her, and she is immensely curious about people and things - she is a Genuine Person. They reckon she is the CEO of a company, and that she arranges a lot of charity fundraisers - one which has something to do with Greater Manchester Police which is where she met Johnny.
It was a glorious few hours, and my actors worked really hard and were very open to a way of working that I’m experimenting with for this production.
Oh, and for reasons that are far too complex to explain, Raymond Hirsch has been renamed as ‘Zanzibar’ by one of my actors! At which my mind leapt to an image of a purple spangly latex suit and glitter... Yeah...